Carve Your name on me
Engrave it deep in my grain
And no other tree
A wonderful poem that capitalizes on the resilience of nature to describe an unbreakable commitment. A poem that penetrates the abyssal mind with the ultimate declaration in the final line-- a demand of loyalty. Brilliant work, Rob.
A brilliant depiction of an eternal emotional attachment. Very thought provoking! An excellent write full of wit.
Brilliant! ! ! ! ! Though it's not an easy task, I liked it 5****
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wonderful write....as usual.....