Harmony I (Who Cares?) Poem by GREENWOLFE 1962

Harmony I (Who Cares?)

Rating: 4.8


Who cares about their color?
They'd twinkle anyway .
Someday they'll both have places
In Heaven's bright array.

Who cares about her poundage?
She still looks very nice.
My arms still reach around her,
I think that will suffice.

Who cares about her cleavage,
Whatever size they are?
I'm sure they have their beauty.
I never got that far.

Who cares about her hairdoo?
She's going with the flow.
I doubt if she considers;
But that's not bad, you know.

Who cares how old she's getting?
She's still the same to me.
Sometimes I take for granted,
We both shall always be.

But care, I do, about her.
In life, above all things.
And cherish every moment
We share, from which it springs.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anna jonson 04 August 2008

very beautiful i like your style

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James Harding 31 July 2008

no matter what happens to change her appearance you would still love her the same good write

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Chitra - 11 July 2008

truely wellpenned soulfool write

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Bianca B. 19 June 2008

so very sweet that just says I dont only like you cause you're pretty

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DELETED NOW 17 June 2008

that's the way to say u truly love someone.

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Cristy Upshaw 29 May 2009

what a wonderful way to look at another. true beauty is on the inside and if such beauty beholds it will shine all the way through. awesome piece.

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Mamta Agarwal 01 April 2009

who cares- some do...wise know better lovely poem, beautiful last stanza Mamta

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Frieda Lumpkins 20 February 2009

This has to be the sweetest poem I have read, not many men are able to put their feelings out like this

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Tanya Stanford 13 August 2008

I wish all men could see the beauty within as you clearly do... Lovely rhymes to.

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Corey Threet 12 August 2008

I love the way u rhyme it's actually something I'm working on and rhythm so I envy all that can write as beautifully as you. Make sure everyone knows about this one too so. Spread yourself! ! ! ! !

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