Has Bri Gone Bye-Bye? Poem by Kim Barney
Has Bri Gone Bye-Bye?
Much more than a week
has now gone by
since I heard a word
from my friend Bri.
Has he gone on a cruise?
Was he hit by a train?
Oh, when will we hear
from our Bri again?
He was silent before,
a time or two,
and I thought for sure
his days were through.
Please make an appearance,
Bri, we can't rest.
We await further word
and hope for the best.
A very well crafted and executed poem, Kim as always. Wonderful and spontaneous presentation with nice rhyme and rhythm.
I noticed a typo and have fixed it, but it may take a few days for the change to show up.
I'm sure Bri is still around. I'll bet his wife won't share her computer with him right now for some reason. Bri, JUST BUY YOUR OWN COMPUTER! YOU CAN AFFORD IT!
Where's our friend Bri? Let's look to the sky. Oh, no, no, no! Better look down below! : ) : ) : )
Rest in pieces, Bri. OOPS, I mean rest in peace. We will miss you.
A wonderful tribute to Bri Edwards, who is a legend in his own mind! Five stars!
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I would like to translate this poem
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Please make an appearance, Bri, we can't rest. We await further word and hope for the best.
Bharati, thank you for the comment.