Hate To Love Poem by Oluwatosin Thomas

Hate To Love

Rating: 4.3


I
With your tongue filled with sores, your lies spread forth like a bomb.
With your blabbing throat, terror echoes on like a war on my coast.
A promise of an imaginary world, my soul longs on like a rod.
You pierce my piece with your irregular lines, yet i made it a stanza of rhythmic lines.
II
I saw your fingerprints, but i felt it's just an imprints.
I raised a glass to make a toast, you burnt my hands to coast.
You knew my purpose and ruined it by your action, i thought you wanted to propose and got lured in by my emotion.
You said it was my fault and I'm too blame, but i knew it wqs your plot and i got the flame.
III
You claimed to give your all, but i also gave my shawl.
You claimed i tore your heart to pieces, but you also sore my muse and ruined my poetries.
You concluded I'm a bad omen to your feeling, but you ruined my life and lost my sexual healing.
IV
A time to reshuffle, a moment to end this puzzle,
You mishandled all, never wish for it to be rekindled at all.
An end must come, a new beginning must turn.
To have a world my own, and shun the lord of your harsh tone.
To hate you, in order to love me.
And to lose you, for every reason to have me.
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THOMAS OLUWATOSIN
TEE-THOMAS (Fearless Lines)

Hate To Love
Friday, December 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 04 December 2020

You claimed to give your all, but i also gave my shawl. You claimed i tore your heart to pieces, but you also sore my muse and ruined my poetries. You concluded I'm a bad omen to your feeling, but you ruined my life and lost my sexual healing. love and hatred...... life is complicated. tony

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Deluke Muwanigwa 04 December 2020

Good poem. It sounds a final account. Move to Zim the heartbreakers here a gentler.

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Mahtab Bangalee 18 December 2020

You mishandled all, never wish for it to be rekindled at all. An end must come, a new beginning must turn. To have a world my own, and shun the lord of your harsh tone. To hate you, in order to love me. And to lose you, for every reason to have me./// beautifully penned; congrats for being this beautiful poem as POD.....from me 5**********

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Mahtab Bangalee 18 December 2020

Love sometimes feels not right to walk in the tort way of heart; love sometimes finds not the righteous stage of heart; love sometimes loses the desired kingdom in the heart of lover that's why it utters " I hate you"

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 December 2020

You claimed to give your all, but i also gave my shawl. You claimed i tore your heart to pieces, but you also sore my muse and ruined my poetries. You concluded I'm a bad omen to your feeling, but you ruined my life and lost my sexual healing. a very fine poem. love and life. tony

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 December 2020

Congratulations dear poet, your poem most deserving for the Member Poem Of The Day Spontaneous poem and written in an honest way. The picture added is marvelous. Thank you for sharing this lovely semi-bio.poem, dear poet.5 stars full vote.

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Jazz Solumate 18 December 2020

u tore my heart to pieces, ur lies and u r pathetic

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 December 2020

Lies and evil acts lead to hatred! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Khairul Ahsan 18 December 2020

Sometimes love turns into hate in no time, though it never should. Heartiest congratulations on your poem’s selection as the ‘Member Poem of the Day’!

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