Have A Break Poem by Rini Shibu

Have A Break

Rating: 5.0


When people try to play on your head
Better to take a break and rest
No matter how much you give your best
You are attacked by the pest
So better to stay quietly in your nest
Otherwise everything will be messed
And you are going to be stressed

Sunday, July 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: people
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lamar Cole 01 July 2018

This is a very good thought provoking poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 July 2018

Dear Rini, a little break from stereotypical activities refreshes our mind and soul! It provides us a chance to re-charge our batteries! As I have told you earlier, we are young…….we have nothing to lose! I am your contemporary poet….both of us started PH concurrently! As a friend, I have a special likeness to you! I too admire your skills! Have a little break and come back! (10)

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 July 2018

so many have read it r u stressed u haven't replied any r u taking a long solitary rest then I shall have to also go west till u r better than best

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Akhtar Jawad 10 July 2018

Sometimes isolation at home is the best source for peace of mind. A thoughtful poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 July 2018

You are attacked by the pest So better to stay quietly in your nest Otherwise everything will be messed And you are going to be stressed........so touching. Nice expression. A beautiful poem shared. Thanks for sharing.

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Kostas Lagos 04 July 2018

A word of wisdom presented in a poetic manner.

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 July 2018

Beautiful poem. Sometimes break is necessary to rejuvenate oneself and come back fresh!

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