Having Read, having Noticed, please Read How it Must Be created, It Lies not In My Pur- pose To Offend you, Thank You for Your At- tention Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Having Read, having Noticed, please Read How it Must Be created, It Lies not In My Pur- pose To Offend you, Thank You for Your At- tention

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Having read, having noticed,
please read how it must be created,
it lies not in my purpose to offend you,
thank you for your attention,

a haiku consists of 5-7-5 syllables,
it does not consist of 5-7-5 words.

This verse format is only one haiku for one poem to enjoy,
and not 4 or 5 haiku in one poem at one time,
too much to enjoy deeply.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The definition of a haiku: 5-7-5 syllables not 5-7-5 words, best regards from Sylvia Frances Chan, Dutch Poetess and Crtitc
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 September 2021

An informative write. Lines that give us thoughts to ponder about. Cleverly expressed.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 02 September 2021

Such an interesting and thought provoking poem. Some, however, don't find it objectionable to create a string of haikus, since each of them can stand alone. It all comes down to the words one uses.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 September 2021

the right typed word is CRITIC, thank you once again for your attention, indeed I am a critic too

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