MyIner Agony

Veteran Poet - 1,736 Points (August 3,2000 / Centerville)

He Made Me Forget To Breathe 6/6/17 - Poem by MyIner Agony

I never imagined it be so fun to lose my innocence
I was always was told it would hurt
Which it hurts a little but it feels good.....I felt so connected to him
He was gentle at the right time but got aggressive when needed
It was a life changing type of fun
He made it where I never wanted to leave him ever again
I'm so glad I gave into​ him
I hope he stays with me forever
Because you never forget your first
It's like opening a new door to life
A whole new level to this crazy game called living
Jumping all the obstacles and being rewarded for surviving so far
I gotta tell you.....That reward was fun

Topic(s) of this poem: fun, romance, sex, virginity

Form: Free Verse


Comments about He Made Me Forget To Breathe 6/6/17 by MyIner Agony

  • Godfrey MorrisGodfrey Morris (6/15/2017 6:05:00 PM)

    Amazing write especially on a concept rarely explored. (Report)Reply

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  • Bernard SnyderBernard Snyder (6/15/2017 12:37:00 PM)

    What an amazing piece young lady. Sounds like your 'first' won't be easily forgotten...to say the least. Great poem. And CONGRATS' on being chosen 'POD! Such a well deserved honor. I'm giving this a 10++++ rating. (Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (6/15/2017 12:32:00 PM)

    Opening a new door! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report)Reply

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  • Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (6/15/2017 10:32:00 AM)

    Nothing is ever the same after the first time! Good poem, a ten and congratulations on being poet of the day.. (Report)Reply

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  • Denis MairDenis Mair (6/15/2017 10:31:00 AM)

    Wow! This expands my understanding of the word FUN. I think it is wonderful that people are capable of a multi-level experience composed not just of pleasure but also of belonging, and a sense of spaciousness in life. It is wonderful how an experience can become a vantage point for looking at life. You share all this in a direct, open-hearted way, so it refreshes my questions. I always wonder how and why we have the capability for such an experience.? ? That too is part of the fun! It takes years to digest the meaning of such an experience, so in a sense it never ends. (Report)Reply

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  • Jayatissa K. LiyanageJayatissa K. Liyanage (6/15/2017 8:30:00 AM)

    First love, first experience, first step towards a settled life. What an enthralling world it could have been! Very well penned personal experience. Thanks for sharing. Congrats for being the member's PoD. X (Report)Reply

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  • Richard Wlodarski (6/15/2017 6:11:00 AM)

    Full of fun romance sex. What a great way to start off the day! Congrats on Poem Of The Day! (Report)Reply

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  • Tom Allport (6/15/2017 2:41:00 AM)

    a poem of lost innocence that will never be forgotten? ......................well written. (Report)Reply

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  • Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion (6/15/2017 2:33:00 AM)

    Poetically and artistically written... I rate it 10++++
    You may visit my BECAUSE I LOVE HER... Thanks...
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  • Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga (6/15/2017 2:17:00 AM)

    The narrative lets the reader have the feel of your life changing experience but I don't agree with your statement 'I never imagined it be so fun to lose my innocence.' You did not hurt your innocence. Nobody can snatch away your innocence. It is a part of your being unless you squander it yourself. (Report)Reply

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  • Tribhawan KaulTribhawan Kaul (6/15/2017 12:39:00 AM)

    hmmmm...nice poem written about the life changing experience. Congratulations, it being poem of the day. Happy reading and writing. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 7, 2017



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