That gorgeous eve
When I kissed your mind
With the fiery lips
Of my literary wit
You said
Kamran!
You have an alien soul
But your heart is like as I own
More I covet to seize your heart
More your soul pushes me away
Your heart makes me feel
As I’m Xerox of Venus
Your body showers myriad love
That I’ve never known
But your soul is always in quest of the One
Who said, “Get out”
When you ate the forbidden fruit
Aug 19,2009
More I covet to seize your heart More your soul pushes me away You are a sharp observer of the matters of the heart and express these very openly..i really liked what i think you are trying to convey here...there are good enough reasons why people adapt certain attachment styles..trust me on that. Regards, Rehana 20/8/09
Your body showers myriad love That I’ve never known Rachel Ann Butler
wow beautiful wish i was that gorgeous eve ahaaaaaaa! ! ! ! i just forget noooooo one should not get personal what to do yours this poem so wonderful I could not help but become personal a tenner from me anjuuuuuuu (I know you have forgotten to visit this poor girl's pages.... do glance this way or throw maybe a few pence at her)
Fantastic Kamran sir.....heart showers love but soul in search of something else.....eloquent! ! !
'Alien soul...but similar heart' the lines are the core of this wonderful write...they say it all....how the soul is in search of an unknown destination though love is knocking hearts door! ! ! ! ! ! Kamran, hope i got it right!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
primordial search....