Heart Break (Revised) Poem by Sandra Martyres
Heart Break (Revised)
He broke her heart
He tore her apart
He crushed her ego
He shattered her dreams
Coz he felt threatened
He then took an impulsive
decision to change jobs
And had the audacity
To think that she'd
Follow him to another city
She had had enough
There was no way
She would follow him
Teary eyed she packed
All her belongings
And walked away
But not before telling him
That he'd have to look
For another partner
To dance quietly
To his miserable tune
thou together, yet so far. heart breaks r so painful...good write
written very well sandra...it actually shatters both this packing and leaving...before doing anything hasty i think a long look should be given to the time they had spent together...my parents fought almost every hour..but they never ever gave me a feeling of a broken home..in fact i was the judge in between...i don't know what the magic was..bitterness in domestic fights never let's us create homes
She walked away in resentment, thinking they would never be in agreement. Well done.
Love it! Just thats what I wanted to say but the prompt says I have to type in atleast 20 characters... atleast 20!
so sad..very touching... expressing fragility but with strength.. the way a woman should be... great thoughts...a significant theme... thanks for sharing... 10+++ lovelots, Maia
A broken heart's break...a common happening because as per the indian tradition only the wife goes to stay with her husband and his family...for a change let us try the other way and see if the husband is hurt and breaks the bond...well done on the theme Sandra
heart break, yes.to walk away is natural.but few can really be brave and deny to just carry on with the misery.a good write.thanks
Heartbreaks yes but to start again its tooooo much! ! ! ! lots oflove anjali -10
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4/19/2024 10:19:27 AM # 1.0.0.1119
you know the perfect words to say it all excellent