Heart In Kolar Poem by Vikram G. Aarella

Heart In Kolar

Rating: 3.5


My ambition has no bounds,
I earn in dollars and pounds
In life, I have come too far
But, my heart is still in Kolar.

I go out with the Brits
who enjoy life to the bits
I cannot live as they are
As my heart is in Kolar.

I have met many women
Blonde, Brunette and Brown,
Even if it sounds bizzare
I want a girl from Kolar.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

VIKSTER! TACKLING A MOST DIFFICULT AVENUE OF POETRY, BUT DOING QUITE WELL WITH IT...BRIEVITY IS SIMPLE WHEN PENNING LIMERICK..BUT WHAT YOU HAVE DONE HEREIS TAKEN A MERE 25 WORDS OF SADNESS, SUCCESS, WARMHEART & YEARN & METICULOUSLY CREATED A STATEMENT OF GRANDEUR STRENGTH...NOT AN EASY TASK...PERSONALLY, I STEER FAR & WIDE FROM BRIEVITY WRITINGS...YOUR ORGANIZATIONAL /STRUCTURAL SKILLS ARE TO BE COMMENDED''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 12 May 2006

this poem is so simple, yet so very powerful! I like it very much

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Preeti - is here! 12 May 2006

Yeah heart is always where we are born and brought up! ! I am sure this is every NRI's feeling too. Well expressed~ Preets

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 10 May 2006

I really like the simplicity and feeling... very nice!

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