Vikram G. Aarella


Without Her - Poem by Vikram G. Aarella

Like a desert without rain,
Like a mother without child,
Like a temple without god,
Is my life without her.
I will survive with her support,
Like a parasite in a host.


Copyright V.G.Aarella


Comments about Without Her by Vikram G. Aarella

  • (9/11/2009 12:52:00 PM)


    Do true loves rest on of host-parasite relation?
    In poem we see such odds and that’s the beauty of this poem.
    Ten
    sr. sakti
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  • (1/21/2007 7:46:00 PM)


    this is well writen poem (Report) Reply

  • (7/20/2006 8:07:00 PM)


    Whoo, never thought a poem that good could come out of three lines, but you have done it!
    ~Amber~
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (6/13/2006 1:12:00 AM)


    PROFOUND IN IMPACT, YET SO FEW WORDS....A TRUE POETIC ACHIEVEMENT...HAVEN'T HEARD FROM YOU LATELY...HOPE ALL IS WELL...PS>GREAT CLOSE! '''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK (Report) Reply

  • (5/16/2006 3:06:00 PM)


    I will survive with her support,
    Like a parasite in a host.


    What? Like a parasite in a host?
    It means that if she will support you, you will act like a parasite?
    Wikipedia said that

    'A parasite is an organism that spends a significant portion of its life in or on the living tissue of a host organism and which causes harm to the host without immediately killing it..........'

    She is supporting you and you are planning to harm her? :) ; -)

    Just kidding! as you wanted me to read this poem. I read and it is a good one.
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  • (5/8/2006 6:03:00 AM)


    Interesting poem about total surrender, nice one Vicram! Best wishes, Aisha (Report) Reply

  • (5/7/2006 2:03:00 PM)


    wow...love the connection u made with parasite n host example...

    preets
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  • (5/7/2006 7:43:00 AM)


    I love this poem. i can totally relate to it (Report) Reply

  • (5/6/2006 12:36:00 PM)


    It's so true.... hard to live without your love (Report) Reply

  • (5/1/2006 1:05:00 PM)


    Nice poem! Yeah, I know how hard it feels to try to go on living without someone- it's hard but you have to achieve it. This poem kind of reminds me of 'Never Gonna Leave your side' by Daniel Bedinfield- you should listen to it; I think you'd really like it! Keep up the good work :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 1, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 30, 2009


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