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Without Her

Rating: 4.1
Like a desert without rain,
Like a mother without child,
Like a temple without god,
Is my life without her.
I will survive with her support,
Like a parasite in a host.


Copyright V.G.Aarella
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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 11 September 2009
Do true loves rest on of host-parasite relation? In poem we see such odds and that’s the beauty of this poem. Ten sr. sakti
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Heaven Leigh 21 January 2007
this is well writen poem
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Abigail Keller 20 July 2006
Whoo, never thought a poem that good could come out of three lines, but you have done it! ~Amber~
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PROFOUND IN IMPACT, YET SO FEW WORDS....A TRUE POETIC ACHIEVEMENT...HAVEN'T HEARD FROM YOU LATELY...HOPE ALL IS WELL...PS>GREAT CLOSE! '''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK
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A . 16 May 2006
I will survive with her support, Like a parasite in a host. What? Like a parasite in a host? It means that if she will support you, you will act like a parasite? Wikipedia said that 'A parasite is an organism that spends a significant portion of its life in or on the living tissue of a host organism and which causes harm to the host without immediately killing it..........' She is supporting you and you are planning to harm her? :) ; -) Just kidding! as you wanted me to read this poem. I read and it is a good one.
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Aisha Sherazi 08 May 2006
Interesting poem about total surrender, nice one Vicram! Best wishes, Aisha
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Preeti - is here! 07 May 2006
wow...love the connection u made with parasite n host example... preets
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Becky Ginn 07 May 2006
I love this poem. i can totally relate to it
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R P 06 May 2006
It's so true.... hard to live without your love
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Nice poem! Yeah, I know how hard it feels to try to go on living without someone- it's hard but you have to achieve it. This poem kind of reminds me of 'Never Gonna Leave your side' by Daniel Bedinfield- you should listen to it; I think you'd really like it! Keep up the good work :)
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