Bleeding Heart Poem by Vikram G. Aarella

Bleeding Heart

Rating: 4.6

Wherever I go, whatever I do
I just see you smiling there
Your heart was my home
without it now, I have gone bare.

I just think of you all the time
when I work, sleep or dine
Why did you leave me like this?
I just wanted you to be mine.

Was I asking for too much?
now all the blame is on me
For loving you, more than anyone else
you know my heart is bleeding,
But for me, no one can see.


Nihar ... 02 August 2009

Nobody sees it... one with pure heart and pure love can only feel it....

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Kesav Easwaran 02 August 2009

nice write...brings out the pain very well young ones feel while pursuing love relations...10

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Milica Franchi De Luri 03 August 2009

Beautiful love poem..........she is a full to walk away from someone who can write like you do

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 August 2009

it is so real feeling in your poem dear. it is heart touching too and i admire it from deep of my heart... keep writing and u may shine one day.....10 read mine mary to marry....miss i miss u

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Lata Jayraj 10 August 2009

I understand your pain..... This poem is similar to my poem ' My Heart Bleeds' by Lata Raaj.

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Omar Ibrahim 16 August 2009

great work keep writing please..

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Ershad Mazumder 14 August 2009

A very good poem. Keep on writing.

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June Bugg 13 August 2009

you maintained a nice flow, the second to last line is executed well. the tone is appropriate, great job

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Frank Lambert 12 August 2009

Hi Vikram, You've managed to show the pain of a bleeding heart very clearly here. How do we allow it to get to us like this? Love, always full of questions. Frank

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Michael Gale 11 August 2009

This was a very touching sentiment for a broken heart.. Great imagery and a great use of words, well placed. Enjoyed reading this poem! May God bless us all-MJG.

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