Vikram G. Aarella


Bleeding Heart - Poem by Vikram G. Aarella

Wherever I go, whatever I do
I just see you smiling there
Your heart was my home
without it now, I have gone bare.

I just think of you all the time
when I work, sleep or dine
Why did you leave me like this?
I just wanted you to be mine.

Was I asking for too much?
now all the blame is on me
For loving you, more than anyone else
you know my heart is bleeding,
But for me, no one can see.

CR VGA
02/08/09
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Comments about Bleeding Heart by Vikram G. Aarella

  • Omar Ibrahim (8/16/2009 10:06:00 AM)

    great work keep writing please.. (Report)Reply

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  • Ershad MazumderErshad Mazumder (8/14/2009 11:29:00 AM)

    A very good poem. Keep on writing. (Report)Reply

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  • June Bugg (8/13/2009 4:24:00 PM)

    you maintained a nice flow, the second to last line is executed well. the tone is appropriate, great job (Report)Reply

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  • Frank Lambert (8/12/2009 2:51:00 PM)

    Hi Vikram,

    You've managed to show the pain of a bleeding heart very clearly here. How do we allow it to get to us like this? Love, always full of questions. Frank
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  • Michael GaleMichael Gale (8/11/2009 2:45:00 PM)

    This was a very touching sentiment for a broken heart.. Great imagery and a great use of words, well placed. Enjoyed reading this poem!


    May God bless us all-MJG.
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  • Rm. Shanmugam ChettiarRm. Shanmugam Chettiar (8/11/2009 10:14:00 AM)

    a right emotion at right age in usual spirit. well. shan (Report)Reply

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  • Graham Russell (8/10/2009 3:04:00 PM)

    a beautiful piece
    pain abounds within it.
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  • Supriya PrathapanSupriya Prathapan (8/10/2009 8:17:00 AM)

    I'm sure most sensitive individuals on this planet would identify with this poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Lata Jayraj (8/10/2009 12:26:00 AM)

    I understand your pain..... This poem is similar to my poem ' My Heart Bleeds' by Lata Raaj. (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/4/2009 8:50:00 PM)

    it is so real feeling in your poem dear. it is heart touching too and i admire it from deep of my heart... keep writing and u may shine one day.....10

    read mine mary to marry....miss i miss u
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  • Milica Franchi De Luri (8/3/2009 4:11:00 AM)

    Beautiful love poem..........she is a full to walk away from someone who can write like you do (Report)Reply

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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (8/2/2009 11:36:00 AM)

    nice write...brings out the pain very well young ones feel while pursuing love relations...10 (Report)Reply

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  • Nihar ... (8/2/2009 8:00:00 AM)

    Nobody sees it... one with pure heart and pure love can only feel it.... (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 2, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, December 27, 2009


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