Heart Of A Mirror Poem by Qistina Zaini

Heart Of A Mirror

Rating: 3.1


Every time “I” see people…,
“I” feel great! “I” feel happy!
“I” feel happy to be with them!
“I” can see many people with many difference characters!

When they feel sad,
“I” will feel the same...
When they are laughing,
“I” will laugh too…

But now,
“I” only a pieces of an ugly mirror,
All “my” beauty has change!
“I” can see them anymore!
“I” am alone now!
Crying alone,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Charmaine Simpson 13 January 2006

Very sad poem - you will one day find comfort, happiness, and balance within yourself, then you will no longer need the approval of another person for your worth.

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Charles Chaim Wax 11 January 2006

a time comes when I becomes TRUE SELF and bodies forht its own existence free and utterly honest a fine poem

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John Tiong Chunghoo 11 January 2006

well, life is a cycle of up and down. we even die one day.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 06 March 2008

hey..don't cry baby....i'm gonna be with you and make you happy all the time, the time of your life.

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Lara W.a 24 January 2006

Well we all feel that way sometimes... This is sad and incredibly honest; u did a fine job here, Qistina.

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Uriah Hamilton 13 January 2006

in my heart of hearts, I believe everyone is an angel, put great value on yourself.

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Mary Nagy 13 January 2006

I think you've done a good job here Qistina. Very nice. Sincerely, Mary

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Faith Elizabeth Brigham 13 January 2006

a sad but profound poem...life is hard but it can be very beautiful as well...nice job! All my best-Faith

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