Hell Poem by Melvina Germain

Hell

Rating: 5.0


Lost in a crowd of darkness.
Hidden deep in the underflow,
of the non spiritual.
Gazing into empty eyes,
terror captures the moment.
Timeless effort reaps no
acknowledgement
Creeping among the dreads
of a dead society.
Immersed in the bellows of

HELL


(April 22,2007)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 27 April 2007

lack of verbosity. every word is implemented in this impressive, electrifying - torrent of a definition. Melvi, keep on. sjg

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 26 April 2007

Hell is a Crowded room, my friend... Melvina 10

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JoAnn McGrath 22 April 2007

Oooo.....that's a better depiction then the bible gives....you have such a way with words that give great picture to the mind...: O)

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Sean North 22 April 2007

HELL is just so underground, thanx for shedding some light, HELL OH... a write Melvina..i like it a lot

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Theodora Onken 22 April 2007

Melvina, you have captured it perfectly...leaving me...with a chill! Blessings, theo

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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