Help! ! ! Poem by Cassy Taberna

Help! ! !

Rating: 3.3


H-help
Help me Lord
Help
The world is invalving around me
H-help
The pain is to much to bare
H-h-help
Take me away Lord!
hhhelp
I cant take it anymore!
hhhheeellllppp
I need you Lord! !
(No, we need you)

Augest 23,2007

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

wow, i love this poem...it make you think, cos everyday, millions of people cry out to the lord for help...*10*

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Eyan Desir 25 February 2009

interesting poem you got here' I liked it

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~ Jon London ~ 28 June 2008

Such a poetic soul you have Sunshine, your faith shines through wonderfully in this delicate penned piece...brilliant job best wishes...stay strong Jon.

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Greenwolfe 1962 28 June 2008

I loved the last line of this. I thought this made it worth reading. So, I gave it my recommendation score of 8. Nicely done. GW62

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 March 2008

don't go away, cassy.appreciate lives.

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Flame6203E . 09 December 2007

wow i never new u were a catholic

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Cassy Taberna

Cassy Taberna

Missoula, Montana
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