Tiffany Wolf

Help

I can feel your tongue on me,
Wet saliva on my lips, cheeks, chest, legs.
Everywhere is shaking,
From hurt, anger, dizziness and loss.
No more innocence or smiles,
Because you are moving back and forth.
It is a sensation I have never felt before,
And I don't like feeling it!
You stuff a sock in my mouth,
To muffle the screams for people not to hear.
HELP!
The words won't get past the fabric!
I can feel the sweat dripping down your body,
And it makes my spine tingle!
I cry,
And you lick away that tear.
I try not to cry anymore,
So I don't have to feel anymore of you!
The friction of our bodies,
The feeling of you inside me!
It all makes me so sick,
And I have no more desire to live!
You make a noise,
And now I wish to get sick.
Something slips out of my mouth,
I'm not quite sure what this alien noise is.
It came out without me saying,
You take out the sock.
The noise comes more,
And I shake uncontrollably!
What is happening,
With both me and you?
What is it,
What are you doing to me? !
I see the stress on your face,
In your eyes I see the fear in mine.
I wish for this horrible ordeal to soon cease,
The sensation is now pain.
The heat of our bodies,
It's no longer barable!
You make more noises,
As do I.
More tears,
And more of your tongue.
Black fades in on my sight,
What is happening now?
My body is becoming weak,
And I can no longer stay awake.
I fall into a deep sleep,
I wake from the feeling of someone staring at me.
I gently open the lids of my eyes,
And there you are.
My rapist, my used-to-be friend,
You kiss me, and I flinch.
My body goes limp forever,
The last thing I see is you.
My rapist....My murderer,
The last thing I say.
Before I go into the eternal sleep is.....
HELP.

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 28, 2009
Poem Edited: Monday, February 2, 2009

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  • (: God's Wild Child :) (2/8/2009 9:29:00 PM)

    wow. u r a fantasic writer girl. keep it up!

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  • Louis RamsLouis Rams (2/7/2009 12:26:00 AM)

    for someone so young, you hold a smoking gun.

    very good write. a ten for your pen

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  • Allan Macli BorgesAllan Macli Borges (1/29/2009 8:45:00 PM)

    i'm AMAZED! it's cruel and....beautiful!

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  • Derrick Andrews (1/29/2009 3:49:00 PM)

    Amazing.. This poem is so direct, so descriptive.. I could picture everything as I read.. Great write.. Takes alot of courage to write about something so sensitive...

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  • Mifael Llauderes (1/29/2009 11:17:00 AM)

    a graphic narrative, vivid imagery, strong and direct to the point... in effect it's very affecting.

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (1/29/2009 10:50:00 AM)

    This is so powerful, something as sensitive as this must be very difficult to pen....this piece shows bravery, courage.....so much strength....thank you 10


    Best of Health & Happiness

    Jon

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  • Matt Turner (1/29/2009 2:27:00 AM)

    Some of the things you say can be shortened, you over state some of the feelings. So much so that it's repetitive. Overall, I liked it.

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  • Joseph Poewhit (1/29/2009 1:32:00 AM)

    RAPE - is a traumatic thing for a woman. It can last a life time. Your poem sort of presented it as a learning experience, except for the sock part. Rape is violent most of the time. That is part of the rapist pleasure the fight and excitement.

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  • Ency BearisEncy Bearis (1/29/2009 1:20:00 AM)

    you revealed in your write the weakest point of a woman..although sickening..you pictured it very well with your compostion...

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  • Nagourta (1/29/2009 12:24:00 AM)

    'There are some on this earth who deserve death.'
    -Nagourta

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  • Nagourta (1/29/2009 12:24:00 AM)

    'There are some on this earth who deserve death.'

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  • C.R. ClarkC.R. Clark (1/28/2009 11:56:00 PM)

    I cannot say that I enjoy reading poems like this, I don't. The crime of rape is such a dispicable act, but sadly, it is a fact of life. Your poem emphesizes some very strong emotions, fear, anger, shame, a feeling of utter helplessness. You have written a very good poem about a disgusting, perverse act... I give it a 10.
    Richard

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  • Krista Churchill (1/28/2009 11:38:00 PM)

    Great work I like the part about the fear in the eyes really makes a lot of sense.. The beginning is nice also.. Great piece Tiffany

    KRISTA

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  • Eddie Roa (1/28/2009 11:09:00 PM)

    Rape is such a strong and dynamic emotion that is difficult to express in a running account. You would have to capture the frenetic movements, the anguish, the bestial act, the pain, the panic and a host of other traumatic feelings involved in such an act. I didn't feel the intensity of all these in the poem. Nevertheless the poem is gutsy.

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  • Eyan Desir (1/28/2009 11:08:00 PM)

    perfect thts all i can say

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  • Ken SuhKen Suh (1/28/2009 10:31:00 PM)

    GOOD LORD! ! ! ! ! ! This is scary! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! scary magnificent! ! ! ! ! The emotion is SOOOO strong! ! 10+ 10+ 10+ 10+! ! ! ! !

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  • Marvin Brato (1/28/2009 10:26:00 PM)

    T his is amazing write
    i t portrays the demonic act
    f rying the victims to roast
    f ricking their souls with gruesome
    a gony induced by lust
    n othing else the victim/s can do but
    y earn to die to cease the pain!

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  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (1/28/2009 10:12:00 PM)

    gr8t write. I can only hope it is inspired by creativity.

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  • Rory Sixx (1/28/2009 9:55:00 PM)

    Wow. I'm taken back. I'm actually speechless. Good write despite the demoralizing content. I pray this didn't actually happen to you.

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  • Michael Loring (1/28/2009 9:42:00 PM)

    Really does portray someones feelings when raped. Though I hope that didn't actually happen to you.

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