Help Me!Help Me! Poem by Susan Williams

Help Me!Help Me!

Rating: 5.0


Help me!Help me!
The big-wigs in charge of our PH land
have decided to turn off notifications
to me telling me
that you my dear friends
have commented on a poem of mine.
That leaves me to searching
poem after poem
and 100+ poems is a lot of poems
to search for a new comment or maybe two.
So if you could, if you would,
after you comment on a poem of mine
please drop me a line
in the comment section of this "poem"
telling me the title and I swear
that neither rain nor snow nor darkness of night
will keep me from reading your comment
and riding to your store of poetry
and reading one or two of yours!
Just a copy and paste here on this page
of the title of the poem you commented on
and I swear I will love you forever

If PH ever turns notifications back on,
I also swear I shall let you know
and we can party down!

Love,
Notificationless Susan

Saturday, February 22, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: commentary,helplessness,poems
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Allport 02 March 2020

DO NOT WORRY.......help is on the way...I have put something in the post to day...it should arrive before the fall...bet you've guessed? it's a CRYSTAL BALL!

14 0 Reply
Susan Williams 04 March 2020

hahahahahahahaha- thank you for cheering me up! ! !

0 0
Soran M. H 24 June 2020

The notifications has turned on again, but the big-wigs and Notification-less Susan still echoing in my ears when ever I read this poem, well; it is a simple poem, but sending through a strong message to every one including PH's people. it is deserve 10/10 and onto my fav list, thanks for sharing your feelings dear excellent poet

14 0 Reply
Susan Williams 14 December 2020

Mj- - my dear friend, what would I do without that powerful mind of yours enticing me to go deeper and deeper and never be satisfied with just the surface- -you are a jewel to poem-hunters

0 0 Reply
Mj Lemon 29 November 2020

I've returned to this great work a number of times, and each time I hear John, Paul, George and Ringo. This last reading made me realize a metaphorical importance. Seems we all are being 'turned' off by anyone in charge, and anyone in charge of anything. Could that be because those in authority are finally beginning to realize they can't rally help in any way? There's so much meaning in the terrific verse, Susan.

1 0 Reply
Susan Williams 14 December 2020

my dear friend, what would I do without that powerful mind of yours enticing me to go deeper and deeper and never be satisfied with just the surface- -you are a jewel to poem-hunters

0 0
Quoth Theraven 28 October 2020

Susan, Did they ever fix the comments notifications? QtR

1 0 Reply
Susan Williams 08 November 2020

of course not, I found a way around that- -one has to be tricky to navigate around PoemHunters these days! ! !

0 0
Susan Williams 23 September 2020

Well said, Robert, well said!

1 0 Reply
Susan Williams 13 September 2020

Kevin part 2- -And please feel free to ask me to read one of your poems specifically- -it is just another way to get much needed input on a poem amongst thousands of poems posted each day. And sometimes an ATTA-BOY is just what we need to hear! We be friends, you and I, and I would be honored to be asked to read anything by you

2 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success