Catrina Heart

High Noon - Poem by Catrina Heart

Once in a high noon – Wednesday
Leisurely, the nightjar and goldcrest
Took the weight off their feet
By the limbs of juniper and fir tree
Wherein names in vast crowd
Raced towards the high throne
And walked on the red carpet
Of beauteous gorgeous eminent
Of painters, playwrights and artists

She was eager to bestow her sail
To fairy godmother of all fate
A choice rendered in a heartbreaking work
Of the melancholic strings of harp
She stepped backwards, inch by inch
String by string, notes flew on wings
Her silence held on a bite of lip
And gone away in teary eyed pearls

Upon the horde of famous thespian
Where all viewers have eyes on fuss
She forwent and ripped her own
Yielded you to the cuckoo bird of love
Who sung melodious canto of charm?
Who was eligible to tease and dance?
Like parakeet or cockatoo on romance
As the white flag raised, lovers’ era and break

Red lane opened on a center stage
Where amorous heart seen right, untainted
Played the chords of zealous account of love
Bestowed to someone who would hold your hand?
Someone who would care on the endless nights
Someone who would love you more in each passing daylights
But it turned out not to be… just another disguise
Another play of fire, another game to their mind…

Comments about High Noon by Catrina Heart

  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (12/14/2009 8:24:00 AM)

    written with much effort and care. good. shan (Report) Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/4/2009 8:20:00 PM)

    She stepped backwards, inch by inch
    String by string, notes flew on wings
    Her silence held on a bite of lip
    And gone away in teary eyed pearls.some lovey and pure soul is sitting in pet'sprecious heartandi think some oneshould fill that place... well deserviing pat on her backfor splendidwork.. I wish i could be the man for it....hahahh lovely deserving 10
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  • (12/4/2009 12:59:00 AM)

    a fantastic allusion and flows well....beautiful poem.....10 (Report) Reply

  • (12/3/2009 5:43:00 AM)

    This poem clearly shows progress and tighter control. I won't pretend to understand all the lines; a few sound awkward. Yet I'm glad to see that cliches are at a minimum this time. The poem flows more seamlessly and naturally than most of your others. Much better, Catrina. (Report) Reply

  • (12/3/2009 5:17:00 AM)

    Wow, what a beautiful creation, incredible work! 10 is the least for this kind of write. (Report) Reply

  • (12/3/2009 3:56:00 AM)

    catrina im sitting here in awe after reading expressive flowing thanks 10 (Report) Reply

  • (12/3/2009 2:54:00 AM)

    10/10..............................! (Report) Reply

  • (12/3/2009 2:38:00 AM)

    Yummy this is wonderful, The poem consist of a perfect balance of
    Poetic words, a nice taste of normal words which not poetic readers
    can enjoy and an encellent flow to keep the readers lock in...
    Well excuted...Good Job C.T.Heart...
    Voted 10/10/10
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  • (12/3/2009 2:06:00 AM)

    another play of fire, fresh from the oven, nice piece as always (Report) Reply

  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (12/3/2009 1:55:00 AM)

    ma'am, you always amaze me! very remarkable and fantastic! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 3, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, July 29, 2011

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