Ralph O'Grantson
Ghana
Ralph O'Grantson
Ghana
Him...No...Him (2)
Rating: ★5.0
Still no answer
No sign of music
Full with anger
I watch time tick
Then what's this? what's this?
A sweet scenting work of art
A sudden twist in his kiss
Soothes my heavy laden heart
Looks at me in a different way
With cherish, passion and care
Elements of love come to play
Lifting me high in the air
It was he that was first
But what about the late comer
Looking right then left
Choosing just grows harder
No sign of music
Full with anger
I watch time tick
Then what's this? what's this?
A sweet scenting work of art
A sudden twist in his kiss
Soothes my heavy laden heart
Looks at me in a different way
With cherish, passion and care
Elements of love come to play
Lifting me high in the air
It was he that was first
But what about the late comer
Looking right then left
Choosing just grows harder
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The poor young dame draws nigh to her conclusion.
I'm still following up and will keep you abreast with the progress.
i had thought it will all end in this second poem but unfortunately we will need to wait a bit longer.
I'm still following up and will keep you abreast with the progress.
i had thought it will all end in this second poem but unfortunately we will need to wait a bit longer.
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COMMENTS
Hnt Var
19 September 2012
Every poem that I read of you, seems to leave me baffled!
Very nice write!
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David Gerardino
11 July 2012
i can see the words, , very good.you might wont to work on the last line...........
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Pranab K Chakraborty
07 July 2012
...need to wait a bit longer.....yes. Run long...write more...
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Pranab K Chakraborty
07 July 2012
...need to wait a bit longer.....yes. Run long...write more...
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Pranab K Chakraborty
07 July 2012
...need to wait a bit longer.....yes. Run long...write more...
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Pranab K Chakraborty
07 July 2012
...need to wait a bit longer.....yes. Run long...write more...
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Urshula Davis
06 July 2012
This is fantastic! ! I love your way of telling a story in poetry! !
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Darkangel Flyfree
05 July 2012
I like it! Wonder who the poor young dame will choose, can not wait for the conclusion! Nicely written Ralph! ! !
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Kaila George
05 July 2012
OMG Ralph! ! ! there s more...smiles... shakes head I love this...intresting....its quite brillant really. Cant wait to read more.
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