Ralph O'Grantson

Rookie - 9 Points (27th march / Ghana)

Him...No...Him (2) - Poem by Ralph O'Grantson

Still no answer
No sign of music
Full with anger
I watch time tick

Then what's this? what's this?
A sweet scenting work of art
A sudden twist in his kiss
Soothes my heavy laden heart

Looks at me in a different way
With cherish, passion and care
Elements of love come to play
Lifting me high in the air

It was he that was first
But what about the late comer
Looking right then left
Choosing just grows harder


Poet's Notes about The Poem

The poor young dame draws nigh to her conclusion.
I'm still following up and will keep you abreast with the progress.
i had thought it will all end in this second poem but unfortunately we will need to wait a bit longer.

Comments about Him...No...Him (2) by Ralph O'Grantson

  • (9/19/2012 3:15:00 PM)

    Every poem that I read of you, seems to leave me baffled!
    Very nice write!
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  • (7/25/2012 10:16:00 PM)

    Oh, it's very interesting. I'll wait. (Report)Reply

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  • David Gerardino (7/11/2012 6:15:00 PM)

    i can see the words, , very good.you might wont to work on the last line........... (Report)Reply

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  • Pranab K Chakraborty (7/7/2012 10:32:00 PM)

    ...need to wait a bit longer.....yes. Run long...write more... (Report)Reply

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  • Urshula Davis (7/6/2012 12:29:00 AM)

    This is fantastic! ! I love your way of telling a story in poetry! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Precious Okidika (7/6/2012 12:06:00 AM)

    i like the rhyme scheme but still prefer the first. (Report)Reply

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  • Darkangel Flyfree (7/5/2012 11:36:00 PM)

    I like it! Wonder who the poor young dame will choose, can not wait for the conclusion! Nicely written Ralph! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Kaila George (7/5/2012 11:22:00 PM)

    OMG Ralph! ! ! there s more...smiles... shakes head I love this...intresting....its quite brillant really. Cant wait to read more. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/5/2012 10:21:00 PM)

    wow...i love this! so will have to wait for him...no..him (3) (Report)Reply

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  • Kasia Fedyk (7/5/2012 9:54:00 PM)

    Another bravo, Ralph I just love your style and your vision! Fantastic! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 5, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, July 6, 2012


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