जीवन तूने सब कुछ दे कर
बेदर्दी से लूट लिया
सब्र बचा था वो भी सबकी
हमदर्दी ने लूट लिया
Pulsating expression! A very short poem but highly expressive! Thanks dear sir for sharing....10
Thanks for the generous comments and for your constant support on this journey.
जीवन तूने सब कुछ दे कर बेदर्दी से लूट लिया सब्र बचा था वो भी सबकी हमदर्दी ने लूट लिया.........so touching and impressive. A poem on cruelty is being nicely executed. Great write.
Thanks, Dear Kumarmani ji, for an interpretive and a thoughtful review of this four liner. Thanks also for the appreciation.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
bahut umda sir! Kavita ne gaggar mein sagar bhai diya. Always a delight to read your poetry.