हिंदी मेरी शाकुंतल है देश मेरा दुष्यंत.
गहरा परिचय अमिट निशानी आकर्षण अत्यन्त.
भुगत रहे हैं दोनों अपने शापजन्य परिणामों को
जाने कब काली छाया का हो पायेगा अंत.
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(Faridabad, India)
(November 22,2014)
These four lines have expressed a great thought...thanks for sharing...
Thanks a lot, Mdm. Hindi has been at the receiving end for various reasons in our country. But slowly and steadily, things are changing.
is muktak ki ek ek line bezor hai......lalawab...upma alankar ka a-dwitiya(jiske saman dusra koi nahi) udaharan..
Every language is a temple in whic those who speak it is enshrined, Hindi has it's own charm. I have written so many Hindi poems: - 1) Ardhangni, 2) Rangon Barkha. I have suggeted only two, hope you'll read these poems and favor me with your comments. I very much liked your poem and rate it as 10. It's really meaningful.
Sir, I cannot adequately express my thanks to you for your wonderful comments on the poem as well as its language.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
So well said in just four line. Yes, we are among people who have easily forgotten our historical past, and are condemned to repeat it.
Of course, we don't seem to be learning from our history, though, it is a great source to examine our strategies and to fine tune it as per the ground realities. Thanks, Aniruddha ji.