तीर चलाओ इन्दर जी (Hindi) Poem by Rajnish Manga

तीर चलाओ इन्दर जी (Hindi)

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उमड़ रहे हैं बादल फिर फिर तीर चलाओ इन्दर जी.
लगी टकटकी नील गगन पर नीर बहाओ इन्दर जी
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तनमन को झुलसाने वाली तपन चितायें और न दो
जन जन को सुलगाने वाली गरम हवायें और न दो
रहम करो जी रहम करो गलती हुयी तो माफ़ करो
नतमस्तक हम सारे हैं कर्मों की सजायें और न दो

तनिक हमारा हाल देख कर दया दिखाओ इन्दर जी
लगी टकटकी नील गगन पर नीर बहाओ इन्दर जी

Sunday, November 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: cloud,drought,rain,rainy season ,sky,weather
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 07 November 2015

Let cloud make rain in this fantastic sharing to cherish life all around and getting water is boon. The cloud is singing here to rain again and again. Wise sharing.10

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Akhtar Jawad 05 November 2015

Indra or Varuna, Hindu God of rains, nicely requested to use his Indradhanush so that it may rain and the humans may get rid of heat strokes. A beautiful poem..................................10

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Rajnish Manga 06 November 2015

Please accept my sincere thanks for going through the poem and appreciating the same- along with your enlightened views.

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M Asim Nehal 01 November 2015

Bahut khoob..............................Rajnishji.............10++

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Rajnish Manga 06 November 2015

I am thankful to you, Md. Asim ji, for visiting the page, for reading the poem and appreciating my effort.

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