Rajnish Manga

Gold Star - 166,642 Points (September 10,1951 / Meerut (UP) / Presently at Faridabad (Haryana) , India.)

तीर चलाओ इन्दर जी (Hindi) - Poem by Rajnish Manga

उमड़ रहे हैं बादल फिर फिर तीर चलाओ इन्दर जी.
लगी टकटकी नील गगन पर नीर बहाओ इन्दर जी
तनमन को झुलसाने वाली तपन चितायें और न दो
जन जन को सुलगाने वाली गरम हवायें और न दो
रहम करो जी रहम करो गलती हुयी तो माफ़ करो
नतमस्तक हम सारे हैं कर्मों की सजायें और न दो

तनिक हमारा हाल देख कर दया दिखाओ इन्दर जी
लगी टकटकी नील गगन पर नीर बहाओ इन्दर जी

Topic(s) of this poem: cloud, drought, rain, rainy season , sky, weather

Form: Free Verse

Comments about तीर चलाओ इन्दर जी (Hindi) by Rajnish Manga

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/7/2015 4:40:00 AM)

    Let cloud make rain in this fantastic sharing to cherish life all around and getting water is boon. The cloud is singing here to rain again and again. Wise sharing.10 (Report) Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (11/5/2015 5:05:00 AM)

    Indra or Varuna, Hindu God of rains, nicely requested to use his Indradhanush so that it may rain and the humans may get rid of heat strokes. A beautiful poem..................................10 (Report) Reply

    Rajnish Manga (11/6/2015 11:50:00 AM)

    Please accept my sincere thanks for going through the poem and appreciating the same- along with your enlightened views.

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/1/2015 1:39:00 PM)

    Bahut khoob..............................Rajnishji.............10++ (Report) Reply

    Rajnish Manga (11/6/2015 11:46:00 AM)

    I am thankful to you, Md. Asim ji, for visiting the page, for reading the poem and appreciating my effort.

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 1, 2015

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