Rajnish Manga

Gold Star - 145,679 Points (September 10,1951 / Meerut (UP) / Presently at Faridabad (Haryana) , India.)

मुहावरों वाले मुक्तक (Hindi) - Poem by Rajnish Manga

तारे गिना गये, त्रिशंकु बना गये, आँखें दिखा गये
जिन जिन पे भरोसा था मुझको ठेंगा दिखा गये
उड़ती हुई चिड़िया के पंख जो, गिनना सिखा गये
छठी का दूध हमें याद दिला कर, उल्लू बना गये

घाट घाट का पानी पी आँखों में धूल मलो मेरी
आस्तीन का सांप बनो छाती पर मूंग दलो मेरी
मेरी आँखों का तारा ही बना खून का प्यासा है
खिचड़ी अलग पकायेगा दो टूक कहूँगा सुनो मेरी

Topic(s) of this poem: deception, poem, poetic expression


Comments about मुहावरों वाले मुक्तक (Hindi) by Rajnish Manga

  • Akhtar Jawad (8/31/2016 6:01:00 AM)


    A lovely satire on deceptive persons, a nice poem.................... (Report) Reply

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  • Ajay Kumar Adarsh (8/23/2016 12:29:00 PM)


    lajawab sir.................bezor......jo kahun sab kam hai............10+++++++++++++++++++ (Report) Reply

    Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (8/24/2016 7:13:00 AM)

    मुहावरे वाले मुक्तक आपको पसंद आये, आपका शुक्रिया.

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/9/2015 10:44:00 PM)


    Wah wah...Aaj ke mahoul per ek satik vichar.....Maza aa gaya Rajnishji...Dhanyavaad.10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Bakuli Bhakali (11/9/2015 12:37:00 PM)


    good one...! thanks for sharing! gave 10 (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/8/2015 4:56:00 PM)


    Very wisely expressive this poem is with deep thought provoking emotion. Amazing sharing.10 (Report) Reply

    Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (11/8/2015 11:21:00 PM)

    You comments are always a source of encouragement to me. Thanks a lot, Kumarmani ji.

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 8, 2015



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