~ Holy Milk ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Holy Milk ~

Rating: 4.7


~ HOLY MILK ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
16 February 2010.

Cyclic weeping
Overdue
Love flowething
Thro’ virgin breast
O’ Holy Milk
Who made it happen
Fracturing fragrance of trust?

O’ Fille
Punishment of
Dwarfing forgiveness
Give why?

O’ breast feel jamboree
Nip inertia embarrassment.

From gentled breast
Deliver deathless lovehope
Share him hear
Vouched euphonic motherhood
Spilling relentlessly! Ooohing!

Mete mansion for
Beau’s face
In sousing tear
Assign you dear
Unborn to honor
As riches from love
Not lurid lust.

‘Tis Sanctifier.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prince Obed de la Cruz 29 June 2010

oh goodie... yup... it is a thoughtful and thought-provoking piece... written by a true poet

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Siddartha Montik 07 June 2010

nice one Nivedita! ! Liked it much! ! give a 10 +

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Amrit Rathi 28 May 2010

Glorious expression of Motherhood....Cyclic weeping//Love flowering//Fracturing trust...still //forgiveness...Your style and use of words is unparalleled, no wonder you get so many poets to eager to savor its fragrance and comment. Thanks.

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Marieta Maglas 25 May 2010

Thoughtful, and thought-provoking piece.Thank you for sharing...Mari

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Sally Plumb Plumb 20 May 2010

Quite mysterious I would say.

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 August 2017

Womanhood, motherhood, virginity, holy breasts and holy milk. Very good poem and thought provoking.. tony

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 10 December 2010

A poem full of symbols, though too much abstraction is there still poem is good.

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Shihabudheen K J 07 December 2010

Virgin breast is a symbol of chastity endowed with adorable women reflecting unimaginable flow of fathomless purity.ie her holy milk.great poem. Great poet, please feel to read any one of my poem and comment like 'children of iraq'.

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A thought provoking read. Symbollic of the purity of womanhood and motherhood. Deep content, well expressed.; D

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Dwi Utami 16 July 2010

wow virgin breast! Holy milk when I'know the taste this milk? I'never drink holy milk.just i'know a ''manna''bread from heaven, great poem of you: thumb: : thumb:

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