Holy Society Of Praying Mantises Poem by ONElia AVElar

Holy Society Of Praying Mantises

Rating: 3.8


In the holy society
of praying mantises
females have to feed by rule
from males` bodies
By mating, just after
courting and dancing,
while love-making...
Once there was a mantis born,
I mean hatched, with lesion
- kindness in heart.
She refused to eat males
for breakfast, for lunch,
even for dinner! (yet a small eater!)
Soon the poor creature,
anomaly of the nature,
was accused of being a pervert,
an outcast of a holy society.
She spent her life in praying,
writing memoirs and... love poetry...

The idea came to me after watching a documentary on Animal planet channel on tv. :)

Sofia,28. May 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 30 May 2008

What a thoroughly fascinating concept. In human society, breaks with custom so often result in ostracization by the herd. So it would seem among the mantes. A quirky little piece delivered with a sure hand and an appealing sense of the absurd. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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David Desantis 30 May 2008

Such a romantic at heart, your not capable of being a mantis ;)

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R H 30 May 2008

The mantis with a kind heart and a sense of her own identity it seems - despite being made an outcast she stays true to her convictions...dares to stand out from the crowd and follow her heart...a delightful fable creatively and colourfully expressed. j x

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Will this mutant mantis be favourite for natural election? I love mantis like this. And I've cheered up.

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Donall Dempsey 30 May 2008

Your fable of the vegan mantis est tres droll.Poor thing I hope she finds a like mind and is not lonely in her conviction. Ah well...there is always love poetry! love Donall Donall

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Indira Babbellapati 16 January 2009

i laughed n laughed reading the last two lines...thnq!

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Mark Nwagwu 21 December 2008

A pervert of nature, yes; praying mantis does eat the male after reproduction - I wonder why the male continues to sacrifice himself while reproducing other males - perhaps that's why. We are taught that all acts of nature amongst living organisms, other than humans, are for the good of the species. Just took a look at my wife and wondered whether I would give my life to perpetuate my tribe in the very act of this perpetuation! ...... well, I'm not a spider. Onelia, haven't read your work lately. Please give us a new one soon. Merry Christmas.

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Janice Windle 15 September 2008

Great cautionary tale, Onelia! We must always obey the customs of the country if we are to be accepted into society, even if it means cannibalism! You made me laugh again!

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 08 June 2008

excelent piece of imaginative poetry

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Original Unknown Girl 02 June 2008

How lovely Onelia! ! I say eat all males (then you've destroyed the evidence! !) Poor little mantis, I hope she learnt a new MANTRA - 'I must eat all males after indulging in what their bodies had to offer'.... 'I must eat all males after indulging in what their bodies had to offer'.... 'I must eat all males after indulging in what their bodies had to offer'.... 'I must eat all males after indulging in what their bodies had to offer'.... 'I must eat all males after indulging in what their bodies had to offer'.... OK - so I've lost the plot but you get the idea! ! ! Lovely penning One. HG: -) xx

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