Homeless? /B.O.! ….. [homeless? ; Mcdonalds; True Story] Poem by Bri Edwards

Homeless? /B.O.! ….. [homeless? ; Mcdonalds; True Story]

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I walked to McDonalds to get a cone;
I was by myself. Yes, it’s true. I was alone.
As I walked through a side parking lot …..
I heard a guy yelling, and he was HOT!

“Hot under the collar” is what I mean.
He was hopping mad, and making a scene.
A McDonalds employee was taking heat ….
for not allowing the guy a place to eat?

“Can’t I even come in and buy some food? !
NO! ? Well I certainly think that is very rude! ! ! ! ”
[Ok. He didn’t use each exact word.
His words weren’t angelic; you should have heard! ]

I spoke a few words with the employee then,
before going to buy one ice cream, not ten.
The employee said somethin’ about the guy’s B.O.
[That’s Body Odor, in case YOU don’t know.]

The upset guy was “homeless”, I surmised,
and perhaps drunk; I’d not be surprised.
The city I was in (I think) has many of such,
who many, like “me”, would NOT care to touch.

But who’s to say if ‘they” are so bad?
Many of their life stories may be very sad.
Perhaps mental illness or bad luck would ……
turn me into one of “them”. It COULD.

(written October 20, 2014; revised April 30, 2015)

Saturday, May 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: poverty
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
it is all there in black and white. well, maybe not ALL of the story; i didn't know the WHOLE story. bri : (
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Beach Girl 19 May 2015

That's really sad Bri. I just don't know what to think. I wonder if McDonalds ha some policy concerning disallowing people inside who emit horrible odors? I can see how it would discourage customers if that were so. But at the same time, it's a terrible shame that a human being was treated in such a way.

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Savita Tyagi 12 May 2015

Very compassionate poem. it is sad and discriminating that some body can be denied entry because of BO.

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Jak Black 08 May 2015

Enjoyed this poem Bri. Shows your compassionate side. Ha ha. Homeless people are not all necessarily homeless by choice. They're more to be pitied than laughed at. Such a shame that in this day and age, in the wealthiest countries in the world, some people feel they are totally abandoned and excluded. For some to have much more than they actually need others have to go without the basic neccessities

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