Honey Poem by Little Red Apple

Honey

Rating: 5.0


Honey..
You came to my life when I really needed someone
To share anything I feel inside
To melt my freezing heart
To quench the fire of my grudge
To soothe my broken heart

Honey..
You sail me away from my misery
Acquainted me with a brand-new day
With more beautiful sun bright
With a much prettier moon light

Honey..
You color my life story
By your meaningful feeling
Precious love now I'm having
Bond me tightly with your red thread

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Mclain 21 December 2008

New beautiful flowers are a thrill to see bloom as are you....a pleasure to read..thank you..) it(s for a bee..

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Izik Alcox 21 December 2008

interesting piece, good flow and expression.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 21 December 2008

beautiful thanks for sharing

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Naidz Ladia 16 December 2008

inspired, , , thats u r.. i love ths..

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Kesav Easwaran 16 December 2008

honey and moon...in between a sun...and of course you...what soon? nice poem, Little...gives pleasant feelings...10

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Greenwolfe 1962 24 February 2009

I don't know what the red string means but I bet it is a pledge of love forever. This is a wonderful sentiment to send. This is a precious thing to hear from a girl. This is a very well written expression. It carries some very sweet emotions as well. Nice. GW62

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 28 December 2008

Yes the bondage tainted with pledges and promises and the red bloods.Wow......brightly surprising honey! ! ! !

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Nikoru Bathory 27 December 2008

(this comment is for all of your poems, sry but it's tiring to type 1 by 1...) I like your poems ^^ they're clear and not complicated they're also simple, and I love simple things :) overall, I really like them ^^

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Reshma Ramesh 23 December 2008

nice love poem..............

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I love the title you did great on this poem KRISTA

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