Honey Poem by Little Red Apple

Honey

Rating: 5.0


Honey..
You came to my life when I really needed someone
To share anything I feel inside
To melt my freezing heart
To quench the fire of my grudge
To soothe my broken heart

Honey..
You sail me away from my misery
Acquainted me with a brand-new day
With more beautiful sun bright
With a much prettier moon light

Honey..
You color my life story
By your meaningful feeling
Precious love now I'm having
Bond me tightly with your red thread

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C T Heart 15 December 2008

such a loving poem...nice and sweet...10

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Kesav Easwaran 16 December 2008

honey and moon...in between a sun...and of course you...what soon? nice poem, Little...gives pleasant feelings...10

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Naidz Ladia 16 December 2008

inspired, , , thats u r.. i love ths..

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 21 December 2008

beautiful thanks for sharing

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Izik Alcox 21 December 2008

interesting piece, good flow and expression.

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Greenwolfe 1962 24 February 2009

I don't know what the red string means but I bet it is a pledge of love forever. This is a wonderful sentiment to send. This is a precious thing to hear from a girl. This is a very well written expression. It carries some very sweet emotions as well. Nice. GW62

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 28 December 2008

Yes the bondage tainted with pledges and promises and the red bloods.Wow......brightly surprising honey! ! ! !

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Nikoru Bathory 27 December 2008

(this comment is for all of your poems, sry but it's tiring to type 1 by 1...) I like your poems ^^ they're clear and not complicated they're also simple, and I love simple things :) overall, I really like them ^^

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Reshma Ramesh 23 December 2008

nice love poem..............

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I love the title you did great on this poem KRISTA

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