Hope Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Hope

Rating: 4.7


Alone we walked and in pain
As blade or thorn shall twist
Or loud the silence talked, refrained
And echoes in the mist
Born as angels sing, a light
Once on earth before remains
Peace His Love brings to night
As each new life is more, proclaims
His birth to shine as angels sing
As the universe sang the Birth
Long ago or this night brings
Each babe the hope of earth
As thorn or joy rebounds
His love on earth resounds.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 14 September 2014

Concluding lines are xlent. As the universe sang the Birth Long ago or this night brings Each babe the hope of earth As thorn or joy rebounds His love on earth resounds. Thanx for share. Regards.

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Valsa George 01 September 2014

In the misty night, when the world shivered in chill and despondency, angels sang of peace and joy and the world rejoiced over the birth of Light! The song of peace and hope those angels sang rebounds leaving beautiful echoes! A lovely write!

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Csdb Kind 27 May 2009

i like your style. thank you. do you have the time?

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Raynette Eitel 17 May 2009

Your meter and rhyme are perfect here, not intrusive but so musical. Your theme touches the soul. Raynette

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James B. Earley 02 February 2009

Hope - The essence of life itself! Excellent composition.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 11 September 2022

this is beautifully wonderful poem Bravo!

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 April 2020

And echoes in the mist Born as angels sing, a light Once on earth before remains Peace His Love brings to night As each new life is more, Reading your poem brings into my mind wonderful images and lot of peace. thank you. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 September 2019

IN BETWEEN PAIN AND JOY we walk ever with broadness of perception. An excellent poem is well penned.10

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 October 2018

His birth to shine as angels sing As the universe sang the Birth Long ago or this night brings.. thank u for writing this poem on the Birth of the Lord.. thank u. thank u. tony Each babe the hope of earth ..

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Nudershada Cabanes 11 May 2018

Delightful poem to read. I enjoyed it. Loved the rhyme scheme in this poem.10 Nudershada

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