Amy Ormonde
<font color= red>Nancy, France
Wednesday, June 3, 2009

How Love Has To Deal

Rating: 5.0
I'm Sorry for the pain i've caused
the tears we had to cry
the anger we felt so deep inside
the torment and the anguish that stood at our sides

But what more can I say
we had to deal
it was the only way

Now what happens
do we sit
or keep on laughing
are you going for the door
leaving me helpless on the floor
or can we work this out
between us and no one else

Your going to leave me here crying and in pain
you caused this bleeding and bruising and shame
Why can't you of all people understand?

I did nothing wrong
you upset me so i'm the one that has to fall?
Why must you swing and aim
When your the one that failed playing your own game!

Why must you be so violent
it's a shame

But in the end I'm the one to blame
For this pain
for this bleeding and this beating
Because I'm the one that took it all
I'm the one that loved and failed
So this beating is a remeberance
of how love has to deal.
Amy Ormonde
Onyx Blake 21 June 2009
Wow. Is this about getting domestic abuse. Amywho, niceley done. Bravo.
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Keith Young 19 June 2009
Again very good poem who did u write these poems on
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from the heart through the ink to the paper.. keep writing.
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Ejaz Khan 17 June 2009
Nicely penned Amy, keep it up! I hope you'll keep growing.
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Kyle Jones 17 June 2009
It seems cliche to blame yourself in these situation, yet when beautifully written the underlying and defining reasons behind love show through, much like real life.Well written
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 12 June 2009
Your poem flows like a river within a river.The conflicts are so beautiful.
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 08 June 2009
A bitter poem with reactionary feelings but emotions expressed in a simple way rather making them complex. I wish you could deal the love in some better way. Please keep on writing, it will console you. Best Wishes Naseer
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