If this is
life to the
make it up
shall he in
will in the
be as sane
as could be
In this life
to let the
Thus for a
abode of mirth and
O' God therefore after my death and demise
Do place me in a peaceful palatial paradise.
Your writing is tender and humanly, but I have a view otherwise: I believe that the last day Is the one in life you stay.
Just read this one for the first time, Zaynab. I really like it. It is thoughtful and hopeful. Your staccato style here is well chosen too. These words came to my mind: “If in this life only we have hoped..., we are to be pitied more than anyone.” The resurrection to a better life is not just a hope but a guaranteed promise by one who cannot lie.
Yes wow dear friend you sure grasped and added to it in a brill wise understanding and thought. Yes so true and I admire how you say it that we would be a most pitiable lot if this is the only life we have. And that the resurrection is the guaranteed promise by the one who can not lie, yayy wow hurrah amen to that, way to say! ! ! Warmest thanks! ! ! !
Your style is heart touching, you paint vivid picture of kife do beautifully.Your this piece of beautiful poetry is absolutely my dream.
Yes! Believing makes the difference! Lovely crafted poem!
Good read. Recoding the thought of all good people.
Of course, we have no way of knowing what comes after death. Religious belief, however, becomes so convincing to people, they act as if faith is factual and the soul's immortality and the palatial paradise you cited are guaranteed. That's still faith, not proof. You made a list of all of the injustices, suffering, etc. life after death would redress. Why do these things have to happen in the first place? Why not Paradise Now? Enough said!
Cont/.. Then also our wrongdoings and sins cause our own sufferings and can cause others to suffer. If we followed the one true God to a tee we wouldn't have suffered many hardships and problems in life. Thanks so much for comment.
Hi! I guess I didn't see this comment or I would have responded. You see religious belief as I know it is factual because it is backed and provable by science. As for suffering, you see this world wasn't meant to be the perfect happy paradise, we have to work for that one. This earth is meant for our test and trial to deserve the paradise in the afterlife.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Life in all its meanings translated words have profound implications may be severe and may be uncomfortable but is still the first stage of life to move to the final stage of the isthmus Beautiful