Hurry-Hurry-Hurry Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Hurry-Hurry-Hurry

Rating: 4.8


Hurry-hurry-hurry...
Hurry is the word I hate
hasten I dislike
everyone is always running, is this our fate
no one walks like a decent pike,

what a mess what a sorrow!
Why can't they do more peaceful
do it calm, do today not tomorrow
please be patient, to you all I'll be thankful

They say: Time is money
is it: No time so no money?
Or: I have no money, so am I in a hurry?
or: plenty of money, I take my time, honey

Hurry-hurry-hurry I hate
money-money-money is my fate
then slowly-slowly-slowly
under a huge pile of money

Hurry is the word I hate
hasten I dislike
now you need not walk and hurry it's late
please for God's sake, take a decent bike


© Sylvia Frances Chan
copyright Mon Sep 19 - 2011 at 23.18 hrs -
All Rights Reserve

Published September 19,2011

Hurry-Hurry-Hurry
Tuesday, December 13, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: verse,poem
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This was first published on Poetfreak.com AD.2011.
Now I am very grateful to be able to republish this on Poem Hunter Poem Site, thank you so much,


© Sylvia Frances Chan
copyright Mon Sep 19 - 2011 at 23.18 hrs -
All Rights Reserve

Published September 19,2011
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 December 2018

Have to put this beautiful and clever write to my Poem List. 10+++++

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 January 2019

Grateful for your visit here on my poem site, dear Mrs. Juan-Austin. I am happy to have met you on PH. God's Blessings in Abundance for you and your beloved family.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 December 2018

There are times when we do hurry because of the demands of work and family. Majority of us if not all could very well relate to this wonderful poem on life. A powerful poem, too since by reading this poem, this could fuel the mind to change someone's lifestyle and take a little time to enjoy life. Cleverly and beautifully written.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 January 2019

Thank you so much for your grand compliments, Mrs.Juan-Austin, I am humbled and honoured to read these grand compliments coming from you. it's very interesting for me to know your vision about this poem. Thank you so much for your attentive and sympathetic comments and compliments. I appreciate them greatest.

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David Wood 04 January 2022

Over the Millennial's walk with mobile phone in one hand and a hot drink in the other.

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Nabakishore Dash 04 January 2022

Very decent poem Madam.Hurry, worry and curry make us sorry.

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Nabakishore Dash 22 December 2021

Hurry causes all sorry.Beautifully written poem Mam.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 August 2019

Simply amazing poem, Sylvia. A poetic gem. This write can set the mind to abide what is set forth on this wonderful poem. Must be Poem Of The Day! ! !

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Michelle Robertson 17 January 2019

Absolutely brilliant!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 January 2019

Thank you so much for your kindest comment. God's Blessings in Abundance for you and your family.

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