Hurry-hurry-hurry...
Hurry is the word I hate
hasten I dislike
everyone is always running, is this our fate
no one walks like a decent pike,
what a mess what a sorrow!
Why can't they do more peaceful
do it calm, do today not tomorrow
please be patient, to you all I'll be thankful
They say: Time is money
is it: No time so no money?
Or: I have no money, so am I in a hurry?
or: plenty of money, I take my time, honey
Hurry-hurry-hurry I hate
money-money-money is my fate
then slowly-slowly-slowly
under a huge pile of money
Hurry is the word I hate
hasten I dislike
now you need not walk and hurry it's late
please for God's sake, take a decent bike
© Sylvia Frances Chan
copyright Mon Sep 19 - 2011 at 23.18 hrs -
All Rights Reserve
Published September 19,2011
There are times when we do hurry because of the demands of work and family. Majority of us if not all could very well relate to this wonderful poem on life. A powerful poem, too since by reading this poem, this could fuel the mind to change someone's lifestyle and take a little time to enjoy life. Cleverly and beautifully written.
Thank you so much for your grand compliments, Mrs.Juan-Austin, I am humbled and honoured to read these grand compliments coming from you. it's very interesting for me to know your vision about this poem. Thank you so much for your attentive and sympathetic comments and compliments. I appreciate them greatest.
Over the Millennial's walk with mobile phone in one hand and a hot drink in the other.
Very decent poem Madam.Hurry, worry and curry make us sorry.
Simply amazing poem, Sylvia. A poetic gem. This write can set the mind to abide what is set forth on this wonderful poem. Must be Poem Of The Day! ! !
Thank you so much for your kindest comment. God's Blessings in Abundance for you and your family.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Have to put this beautiful and clever write to my Poem List. 10+++++
Grateful for your visit here on my poem site, dear Mrs. Juan-Austin. I am happy to have met you on PH. God's Blessings in Abundance for you and your beloved family.