Hypnotic Rain Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

Hypnotic Rain

Rating: 5.0

The warmth of our bodies together is
What I remembered
When, the rain came, we lie there on the couch
Sleeping waiting for it to stop
The rain was the only thing we heard
Its soft rhythm against the windowpane
Making its hypnotic music
Until the roar of thunder woke us up
As the lightening flashed its brilliance
Telling us there no point in getting dress
And return to bed

Saturday, January 20, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: rain,bittersweet love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 January 2024

Very romantic lines that linger in the mind and heart. Rain and its soft rhythm could evoke feelings and sentiments to some people. A beautiful poem well expressed.

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Jayne Louise Davies 20 January 2024

Top marks LeeAnn ***** TFS

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Anjandev Roy 20 January 2024

This is a marvelous piece.... thank u, dear LeeAnn...

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 January 2024

Beautifully penned about the rainy night. Loved it. Nice share.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 January 2024

A wonderful poem on bitter sweet love

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Nabakishore Dash 20 January 2024

Nicely written.

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