Eyan Desir

.... I Am Sorry.********

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Streams of apologies
Runs through my heart
The tears of regret
Are wetting my face
Bitterness fills my plate
Guilt makes my heart break
Because I am wrong
Humble are my words
I'm a humble man
My heart has cried
One hundred times
Forgive me please
A Hundred pardons
For the hundredth time
Please, I am sorry.
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Published work of E.D
April 25th 2009

Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 25, 2009
Poem Edited: Sunday, October 4, 2009

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  • Giselle Joseph (9/14/2009 2:01:00 PM)

    You have proven to the world that there's finally a man out there. It takes alot of courage to say that you're sorry. An apology well written very deep indeed.

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  • Lady Grace (6/28/2009 5:18:00 AM)

    asking an apology is a sign of good manners doctor..nicely written..grace

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  • Janell Cressman (6/16/2009 4:30:00 PM)

    made me cry, not many guys i know would say i'm sorry, a really good poem! ! !
    filed with regrect and sorrow over something done, very nice poem

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  • Kimbaline NavasKimbaline Navas (6/4/2009 6:19:00 PM)

    this is nice...the hardest thing is to realize that you was wrong but to write it too good job

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  • Smiley HookerSmiley Hooker (5/14/2009 8:40:00 PM)

    it takes a real man to say 'I'm sorry'. saying it again tells otherwise. show out the best in you and be happy! : -)

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  • Jester's PJester's P (5/13/2009 9:57:00 PM)

    the poem '...I am sorry...() ' is a stron g message of maturity- to say sorry is diffecult to some because it shows weakness, however, it is a strenght that contoured the inner part of our human tendency to love, to believe and to hope for what is best and good.
    the poem has its own style that is qualified to be a master piece in the descipline of poetry.

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  • *~*happily desturbed*~* ? (5/6/2009 6:11:00 AM)

    very heartfelt you said alot in just a few words very good....10++++

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  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (5/5/2009 10:47:00 PM)

    Simple and touchy poem.10++ from me.

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  • Angelic(Annie) Female (5/5/2009 11:42:00 AM)

    I like it.. so deeply regretful and am sure, the person whom its written for, will melt with the streaming tears, and will return to you with remorse, and together you both will build mansions with love, and empires..

    10 for u! !

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  • Maria Barbara Korynt (5/5/2009 8:09:00 AM)

    Fine apologising perhaps will break the heart beloved? Everything depends on it, what your hero did mischief. However the fact that he is able to admit to having made a mistake and to say is important 'I was wrong, I apologise'. It will improve his situation certainly. Very much I like your poem, because it is talking about the respect for the second man. An admission of guilt and repairing, what was bad, are just showing not only feeling, but also the respect to the man. Because... when it is possible to be friends, to love, and what's more to know, if the respect was missing? It isn't possible. (10v.) Greetings for you. Maria Barbara Korynt

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  • Anjali Sinha (5/5/2009 7:31:00 AM)

    so poignant
    but so sweet --this poem
    good write
    anjali

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  • Try and UnDeRStANd mE ....i promise im normal (5/2/2009 7:40:00 PM)

    U seem like such a generous man....dont feel sorry/ i did that and i got no where if they dont forgive just move on ur only hurting ur self! ! 10++++

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  • Anthony Arias (5/2/2009 5:15:00 AM)

    Write like you speak.
    Give the biggest picture with the fewest words.
    Go way deep inside to find what you really feel.
    And it will always be good.

    Oh Yeah,
    Eat words for breakfast.

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  • Ken E Hall (5/1/2009 7:58:00 AM)

    I'm sorry you did not say why you were sorry for what which makes me sorry for not knowing why you are sorry and I am about to retire felling sorry, hope you feel better soon,
    and remember smile though your heart is aching...regards

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  • Identification Accepted (4/30/2009 3:01:00 PM)

    hmm...not sure what you did but nice poem. good luck with everything

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  • Miriam Maia PaduaMiriam Maia Padua (4/30/2009 7:28:00 AM)

    a very nice gesture...very gentleman
    written with sincerity..
    a poem that sends questions in my mind...
    anyway, a nice write...
    10++

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  • Joey Infante (4/30/2009 6:45:00 AM)

    nice piece you have there...

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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (4/29/2009 10:08:00 PM)

    sorry and apology can have few more names...Eyan- one of them could be...10

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  • natshka danda (4/29/2009 7:34:00 AM)

    expressed emotion. truthfulness runs through it. They say to err is human but to forgive is divine but i daresay to forgive is human too. We know forgiveness first from people then God
    This poem should thaw the heart of this Icy Queen

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  • Barry A. LanierBarry A. Lanier (4/29/2009 7:13:00 AM)

    Gosh the power and sincerity of the apology.....don't know if it was to Meg...or whom....but you have this reader wanting to give you a hug....it's allright...to err is human....to admit it is beyond...to apologize in humility is sacred

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