.... I Am Sorry.******** Poem by Eyan Desir

.... I Am Sorry.********

Rating: 3.6


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Streams of apologies
Runs through my heart
The tears of regret
Are wetting my face
Bitterness fills my plate
Guilt makes my heart break
Because I am wrong
Humble are my words
I'm a humble man
My heart has cried
One hundred times
Forgive me please
A Hundred pardons
For the hundredth time
Please, I am sorry.
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Published work of E.D
April 25th 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Identification Accepted 30 April 2009

hmm...not sure what you did but nice poem. good luck with everything

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Ken E Hall 01 May 2009

I'm sorry you did not say why you were sorry for what which makes me sorry for not knowing why you are sorry and I am about to retire felling sorry, hope you feel better soon, and remember smile though your heart is aching...regards

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Anthony Arias 02 May 2009

Write like you speak. Give the biggest picture with the fewest words. Go way deep inside to find what you really feel. And it will always be good. Oh Yeah, Eat words for breakfast.

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U seem like such a generous man....dont feel sorry/ i did that and i got no where if they dont forgive just move on ur only hurting ur self! ! 10++++

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Anjali Sinha 05 May 2009

so poignant but so sweet --this poem good write anjali

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Giselle Joseph 14 September 2009

You have proven to the world that there's finally a man out there. It takes alot of courage to say that you're sorry. An apology well written very deep indeed.

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Lady Grace 28 June 2009

asking an apology is a sign of good manners doctor..nicely written..grace

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Janell Cressman 16 June 2009

made me cry, not many guys i know would say i'm sorry, a really good poem! ! ! filed with regrect and sorrow over something done, very nice poem

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Kimbaline Navas 04 June 2009

this is nice...the hardest thing is to realize that you was wrong but to write it too good job

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Smiley Hooker 14 May 2009

it takes a real man to say 'I'm sorry'. saying it again tells otherwise. show out the best in you and be happy! : -)

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