I And My Loneliness Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

I And My Loneliness

Rating: 4.4


I and my loneliness
Often speak about you
If you were with me
By days, months and years
I would have won your heart.

My loneliness searches you
On the edges of my heart
We often think if you were
I would have been happy
Indeed never lonely.

I and my loneliness
River and the sea
Why don't they apart
When will they apart
When will we get together.

We often speak about
Your letters and memories
I rage to my loneliness
Why she gave you to me
Why only you, not her.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elizabeth Mpanga 26 April 2011

love is a tough game my dear. its not for the faint hearted on the impatient. lovely poem

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Romeo Della Valle 01 May 2011

A brilliant, well penned and poignant write. It reminds me when I wrote A TASTE OF LONELINESS, I was there many times and survived. Great job, my dear,10+++ Love and Peace for always! ...

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Jennifer Lotus 18 June 2011

I like this poem - very well expressed: -)

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KUMAR, THIS POEM IS VERY DESCRIPTIVE AND REAL. IT SHOWS THE TALLENT YOU HAVE AS A POET. I ENJOYED READING IT OVER AND OVER, JUST TO SAVOUR ITS SWEETNESS! THANKS FOR A NIECE PIECE.

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Heath Gunn 05 December 2011

I really like the opening two lines of this poem

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Divya Divya B 24 November 2011

speaking about love in loneliness well expressed10

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lover of poetry sweet 09 November 2011

you have a heart which speaks your ideas over love and loneliness.10

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Dylan Gaudreault 23 August 2011

i feel this great job

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Isobel Byrd Billingsley 02 August 2011

A neat well expressed poem.

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