I And My Loneliness Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

I And My Loneliness

Rating: 4.4


I and my loneliness
Often speak about you
If you were with me
By days, months and years
I would have won your heart.

My loneliness searches you
On the edges of my heart
We often think if you were
I would have been happy
Indeed never lonely.

I and my loneliness
River and the sea
Why don't they apart
When will they apart
When will we get together.

We often speak about
Your letters and memories
I rage to my loneliness
Why she gave you to me
Why only you, not her.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

KUMAR, THIS POEM IS VERY DESCRIPTIVE AND REAL. IT SHOWS THE TALLENT YOU HAVE AS A POET. I ENJOYED READING IT OVER AND OVER, JUST TO SAVOUR ITS SWEETNESS! THANKS FOR A NIECE PIECE.

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Jennifer Lotus 18 June 2011

I like this poem - very well expressed: -)

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Romeo Della Valle 01 May 2011

A brilliant, well penned and poignant write. It reminds me when I wrote A TASTE OF LONELINESS, I was there many times and survived. Great job, my dear,10+++ Love and Peace for always! ...

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Elizabeth Mpanga 26 April 2011

love is a tough game my dear. its not for the faint hearted on the impatient. lovely poem

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Heath Gunn 05 December 2011

I really like the opening two lines of this poem

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Divya Divya B 24 November 2011

speaking about love in loneliness well expressed10

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lover of poetry sweet 09 November 2011

you have a heart which speaks your ideas over love and loneliness.10

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Dylan Gaudreault 23 August 2011

i feel this great job

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Isobel Byrd Billingsley 02 August 2011

A neat well expressed poem.

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