I can die
for the shine in your eye
For the beat of your heart
For that giggle smart
For the dream that you dream
For the hopes that you bear
Deep down your heart
I can die
For the moments you give
The joys to live
The pain you take
To correct my mistake
The concern you show
Generous wealth you blow
I can die
For a moment of relief
For you and your belief
To alleviate a grain of pain
To walk a step with you everyday
I can die, I must say....
11th july 200c
Heartfelt and lovely written poem...nice in vividness of words....
the person about whom you have written, if read this poem will die for you... nice poem, true heart felt tender words
wowwwwwww lovely Niks if you can die for her for so many little things I can imagine your love for her --how lucky she is? I wish I was in her boots lol! ! ! ! -10 anjali
must say 'She' is one lucky girl to have u as that one who can die fr her with such intensity.... :)
For a moment of relief For you and your belief To alleviate a grain of pain To walk a step with you everyday I can die, I must say.... I know how it feels like to wish to live a life-time in a moment..it took my breath away. thanks Niks for writing such a lovely and divine poem. 18th August,2009
A flowing emotional poem that touches on the hearts of your readers. Please don't die as we need good writers like you Nikunj. Top marks Karin Anderson
anyone can die for these things..........nice write Nikunj
this is truly a poetic piece..nice to read..expressions to the max..grace
very emotional lines You are lucky to have such a person to die for regards sandhya
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
passionate love reflected here.. nice write