I Could Be All Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

I Could Be All

Rating: 4.9


Even as tiny dropp of water-
i could be all
i could show you my god
the sun, the moon and you too
i could show you in me-and
you become my god
even as a tiny dropp of water- i could be all
till my mom(sun) picks me up to nurture my soul

In a natural blend of a stream
we could sing his song
In a natural blend of a sea
we could dance to his tunes
In a natural blend of a rain
we could caress his world

EVEN IF NOT FOR ALL THESE-
even as a tiny drop
of water - i could be all

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 27 December 2008

original in expression. good

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Kesav Easwaran 26 December 2008

the life force is every where.. and in every thing...and we as tiny reflections remain complete, each and all...good insightful write...10

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Mamta Agarwal 26 December 2008

you can be complete in whatever you are- even if its a tiny dropp - you could be all. great spiritual insight. Mamta

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Meena Iyer 23 December 2008

beautiful! loved the end the best!

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absolutely great... Good work KRista

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Catrina Heart 25 January 2009

You could be all in all the way you can...positive outlook, great composition...10

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Rani Turton 23 January 2009

The cosmic unity is wonderfully portrayed in these lines.

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Ania R. 03 January 2009

Your poem is beautifully positive. I really like it.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 27 December 2008

This kind of positive feelings will surely help a healthy growth

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Sarah Sisson 27 December 2008

this is deep! what a 10!

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