'I Don'T Know! '

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I don't know about today.

I wake and wake to today.
I wake and wake to today.

I shake and shake til I quake.

I don't know about today.

I know not how many days.
I know not how many days.

I don't know about today.

I shake and quake in the days wake.

I don't know if I'll partake.

I don't know!
I don't know!

I don't know about today.

I don't know!

Thursday, March 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I was cold and my allergies were showing signs of flaring up. Besides that I was making stuff up. Please comment at will and with honesty!
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dinesan Madathil 19 March 2014

You have written from your heart. Care has to be taken in spelling and alliteration of better diction is expected. Wish you all the best ahead.

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Soulful Heart 19 March 2014

song of the day........simple and very true..

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 18 March 2014

beautiful poem more like a song made out of adversity.

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 April 2018

I don't know about today. I don't know! very fine and sensitive to your feelings and you are very honest in writing all that you feel.. thank u very much. dear poetess. tony

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Ramesh Rai 16 June 2015

We are almost unconscious about our life but it will attain super entity when our consciouness is awaken. A very powerful and delightful write.

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Rajesh Thankappan 25 August 2014

Every day is a mystery that may throw up surprises on its bents and curves. Though a certain circumstance may have prompted you to pen this poem, yet it holds good for all 365 days of the year. A good write.

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Delicate Heart 10 July 2014

eye-catchy title. one would first think that ur kinda hesitant being unable to declare ur true love emotions towards someone though it is a lovely and touchy poem. love it.........

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Beach Girl 25 March 2014

I must admit, I was a bit concerned for you as I read this poem. I was relieved to read the 'poet's notes'. Thank goodness, it was only allergies. You expressed your feelings very earnestly as a true poet should!

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