Shania K. Younce

Rookie - 453 Points (4-18-1996 / I can´t remember.)

'I Don'T Know! ' - Poem by Shania K. Younce

I don't know about today.

I wake and wake to today.
I wake and wake to today.

I shake and shake til I quake.

I don't know about today.

I know not how many days.
I know not how many days.

I don't know about today.

I shake and quake in the days wake.

I don't know if I'll partake.

I don't know!
I don't know!

I don't know about today.

I don't know!

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

I was cold and my allergies were showing signs of flaring up. Besides that I was making stuff up. Please comment at will and with honesty!

Comments about 'I Don'T Know! ' by Shania K. Younce

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (4/14/2018 1:35:00 PM)

    I don't know about today.
    I don't know! very fine and sensitive to your feelings and you are very honest in writing all that you feel.. thank u very much. dear poetess. tony
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  • Ramesh Rai (6/16/2015 6:45:00 PM)

    We are almost unconscious about our life but it will attain super entity when our consciouness is awaken. A very powerful and delightful write. (Report) Reply

  • Rajesh Thankappan (8/25/2014 7:58:00 PM)

    Every day is a mystery that may throw up surprises on its bents and curves. Though a certain circumstance may have prompted you to pen this poem, yet it holds good for all 365 days of the year. A good write. (Report) Reply

  • (7/10/2014 9:52:00 PM)

    eye-catchy title. one would first think that ur kinda hesitant being unable to declare ur true love emotions towards someone though it is a lovely and touchy poem. love it......... (Report) Reply

  • Beach Girl (3/25/2014 6:48:00 AM)

    I must admit, I was a bit concerned for you as I read this poem. I was relieved to read the 'poet's notes'. Thank goodness, it was only allergies. You expressed your feelings very earnestly as a true poet should! (Report) Reply

  • Dinesh Nair (3/19/2014 5:57:00 AM)

    You have written from your heart. Care has to be taken in spelling and alliteration of better diction is expected. Wish you all the best ahead. (Report) Reply

  • Soulful Heart (3/19/2014 1:54:00 AM)

    song of the day........simple and very true.. (Report) Reply

  • (3/18/2014 4:22:00 AM)

    beautiful poem more like a song made out of adversity. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 13, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, March 14, 2014

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