I Dreamed Of Love Poem by Valerie Dohren

I Dreamed Of Love

Rating: 4.9


I dreamed of love
but not like this –

a silent heart
a frozen kiss

vain conceit, deceit

words unmeant
passion spent.

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I dreamed of love
the gentle kind –

sweet and true
to ease the mind

unmeasured, treasured

soft and pure
ever sure.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Draper 16 September 2013

In this fine piece are conflicted emotions but guided by love our enduring notion.

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Yasmin Khan 15 September 2013

A beautiful write in compressed meter

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Jonathan H. Scott 13 September 2013

Very nice and easy. Nice.

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Payal Parande 13 September 2013

oh how amazing, wonderful, fascinating and so more just like you........bravo ma'am

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Heather Wilkins 06 September 2013

a beautiful write on love. a great kind of love

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Amitava Sur 16 October 2013

A lovely poem with less words but saying a lot..... very nice

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Rigzin Namgyal 08 October 2013

..a beautiful and sweet dream..wonderful write..

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Sally Plumb Plumb 24 September 2013

A beautiful piece. You have my best regards, Val x

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Kelvin Owusu 18 September 2013

a wonderful dream that is. I dream that one day if I'm lucky I'll meet the other half of me

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Rekha Mandagere 16 September 2013

So sweetly expressed. Beautiful: -)

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