I Gave You A Rose Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

I Gave You A Rose

Rating: 5.0


I gave you a rose and you laughed
I didn't get angry
But I felt disappointment and wept
For I loved you on an eternity
And that has melted into a soup,
In which, you did not enjoyed
It was bittersweet
And I laugh with spite
Now, yr guilt has poisoned you
Because yr partner left
And you were left to face life alone

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr. M. Asim Nehal 24 April 2022

A choice that turned out to be wrong....Nice poetic expression 5****

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Pallab Chaudhury 24 April 2022

Time says the truth but waits... a nice composition... congrats for the poem being selected for TNP!

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Anjandev Roy 24 April 2022

Fine piece.......thanks for sharing....

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Nabakishore Dash 24 April 2022

bittersweet reactions in the poem nicely described.

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Belle Wassermeister 23 April 2022

Well done, my friend. Keep writing!

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Anjandev Roy 10 April 2024

Great write indeed...... thank u, LeeAnn.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 April 2022

Sometimes fate takes its own course and its wind favors us. A touching and well expressed poem.

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David Wood 25 April 2022

Bittersweet revenge. Good one LeeAnn.

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Susan Williams 25 April 2022

that creton didn't deserve a rose, , , unless it was a dead one! way to give him the boot!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 25 April 2022

Dear LeeAnn, I like the honesty in all your poems. What you really feel, you write. Amazing poem dear.....10

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