First, I needed to cry
In utter pain
On every shoulder
I cried my eyes out
I cried
On every shoulder
That was available
I found - all
I found - pity
Not mercy.
Then, I went to cry
At His doors
I laid my heart
Down
On to the ground
Before
I knocked
'I'm here'
I found
My heart was in His hands
Again
I had myself
Veiled from pain
Soaked in mercy
And, with 'Love',
Sealed.
Congratulations of having this poem selected as Member Poem of the Day! Well done.
Congrats! ! ! Touching words poured from your heart. Loved reading it.
Lovely work very heartfelt and worded, you evoke your emotions extremely well, a great member poem of the day.
Now that is gorgeous writing! ! ! Not fancy, not strung up with sparkling lights, no glitter hanging off every word. Just simple truth simply said. It deserves a 10 but the page that takes votes is not working today- -but this deserves a 10
where there is full empty of love there pain is full of bravery!
I had myself Veiled from pain Soaked in mercy And, with 'Love..........a poem filled with deep love and emotions! Congrats.....10
Before I knocked 'I'm here' I found My heart was in His hands..soked in mercy and love........ lovely spiritual poem. thank u dear poet. tony
This is a very emotional poem indeed. Well deserved recognition.
Then, I went to cry At His doors I laid my heart Down On to the ground Before, , In complete surrender before Him one gets peace and happiness. There is nothing in worldly things that we waste our time to have. Nice poem. Liked its sincerity and simplicity.Thanks for posting and congratulation.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A beautiful poem. Yes, faith can do wonders. Faith can heal. Enjoyed reading.