Each time I try to show you
A better way to do
Something or
To deal with
Someone
You retaliate with
A nasty repartee
So from today
I have decided
To leave you
To your own devices
My advice I will only
Share
if you care enough
to ask for it,
or if you dare
it's always good to spare advices...perhaps one may need them for oneself...strong and sharp words polished bright...10
This is a good attitude we must have. But out of our love towards others/friends, often we go out of way to advise them. Your pick of subjects is wonderful Sandra............so much of variety
nice poem. i can actually picture this. someone telling someone there opinion and them never using it. good poem! ! ! 10
'My advice I will only Share if you care enough to ask for it, or if you dare' yeah..only share it only if he s ready to listen...well expressed...
i agree with you.. talk once, and twice.. then walk away... sometimes.
your concern gets hurt is'nt it...a very practical write..everybody could relate to
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Go girl. Do not give precious advice to the undeserving. Let them find their own way. Good write. Runi