I Hunger For More Of You Poem by Meggie Gultiano
I Hunger For More Of You
I love you so much
yet i cannot see you
I wanted to embrace and hug you
but it's hard for me to do
I hunger for your kisses and touch the softness of your face
But i am here
wrapped up in yet another day
another busy day
I was so blessed i met you
in a most unlikely time and date
That was the lowest point of my life
and you came just in time
I wanted to follow you
to be with you anywhere you bid me
My eyes were so tired from so much crying
I am completely worn out
I tried to shut off
the windows of my heart from you
But it keeps on opening
Little did i know
that I can't get you out anymore from my system
within you i lose myself
without you i find myself
wanting to be lost again
In your embrace, i hunger for more of you..
Meggie, your pour of genuine passion is like the pour into a goblet, from an open caraf of sweet wine...Excellent Work, young lady! FjR
The metaphor of love as food and drink is sublime and your poem shares the food and drink of your soul with great passion and some extra special lines. 'Wrapped up in yet another day' is very good, as is 'To shut off the windows of my heart from you'. Lovely write. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
A lovely write, you have poured out your heart in this, 10 Lynda xx
You draw the reader into your deep rich love. 'I tried to shut the window of my heart from you, but it keeps on opening'. Powerful imagery and poem. 10 Karin Anderson
This is a true loving poem of the best kind. Willing to yield yourself to the one you love is a very vulnerable, yet powerful signal to the one you love. GW62
within you i lose myself without you i find myself wanting to be lost again In your embrace, i hunger for more of you.. a complete submission of yourself to the one you loved...it is a perfect combination of two hearts shared with true love...you found yourself in him..always in him..cheers... naizz
wonderful write....I could feel the depth of emotions....I wish I had some of what you write of here...still emptiness and no embrace....I miss the hugs: O)
Oh! refreshening! ............heartfelt.........nice! 10++
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Fine work Meggie, a heart filled with love