I Just Miss U Poem by Luwi Habte

I Just Miss U

Rating: 5.0


I am here surviving lonely
I have to talk with no body
I miss my pair, I need some one beside
I can’t live alone, with out you by my side
Because I miss you surely

Being apart the worst thing in the world
Which hurts inside and never wide my mind
Which kills my pride, I can’t be smart
I can’t able to improve but I lost what I got
Because of your love, because I miss that

In my precious world the love of mine
If you are not by my side am not going to shine
I will be suffering; I will always be in pain
So why you are leaving me alone, if you have nothing to gain
Because I am going to miss you and I will be crying

Either you left me with someone which console me by your name
Or you were to stay by my side permanently and play the game
You let me fall for you as vast as I can’t able to think
Now I got confused that I might be not walking but sink
Because I miss you, don’t you think?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kat , sorrow 21 May 2009

Its so hard to lose someone: (....great poem thank you for sharing love, kat sorrow

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 20 May 2009

A love lost certainly can cause lament..but God answers our prayers perhaps not the answer we are looking for but He answers well! Trust!

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Tou Yang 17 May 2009

WOW this is how i ive been thinking for the past few weeks now... a girl was the one who got me into poem b/c love hurts... this is exactly how i feel... GREAT WORK... couldnt have done a better job myself

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Chad Foster 17 May 2009

it seems as if your sending this with someone in mind, which makes it even better. because it came dirrectly from your heart. which makes it awesome to read.

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Barbara Terry 17 May 2009

This is so sad, yet it is done with tender feelings. You have written what every woman feels at one time or another through her life. This is a very good message to send to men too, letting them know what we want and what we need. A 10+++++ and thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 September 2009

In my precious world the love of mine If you are not by my side am not going to shine I will be suffering; I will always be in pain..........both have definite part to play and are compleiment to each other.it is quaite natural feeling and honest one too....10 rad mine come home....home bound....no separate ways.....

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Emma Adamyan 26 June 2009

guys dont u think in the coming future the name of this young girl will become very famous? as for me im sure of that. being that young and to write such thoughtful poems in such simple and easy readiable way. amazing!

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Kesav Easwaran 26 May 2009

Love missing a lot there...your words bring out well the pain and grief inside...good poem Luwi...10

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Afzal Shauq 25 May 2009

wow its a good poem and I went through your few more poems and liked them...means you are a good poet and sure you are... hope you like my poetry too and your long comments will be added to my new book soon and book will be in your hand too... yours..afzal shauq

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Existential Despair 22 May 2009

A love lost and a heart fractured leaving a pain with each new heartbeat. A very detailed expression here, with a bit of polishing you are going to be a very good poet

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