I know the place

Rating: 4.7

I know the place.
It is true.
Everything we do
Corrects the space
Between death and me
And you."

Tuesday, December 29, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love,places
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 18 July 2017

Such an interesting poem....Thanks for posting??

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 December 2015

Correcting the space is very amazing definitely. Wise poem shared with reality.10

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Gajanan Mishra 18 July 2017

beautiful, correct the space.

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M Asim Nehal 04 October 2016

Short and profound poem....10

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Short and succinct....truly very beautifully expressed.........thanks for sharing

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Suryendu Chaudhury 15 October 2020

Seems like a comment on the point of threshold.

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Lantz Pierre 18 July 2017

The logic here is sublime. From the singularity of knowing a point in space, a correspondence allowing no deceit. Truth. To the act, the doing, that implies, no, that entails a second point and the line between. And so something beyond the surety of identity is introduced. Duality. Negation and presence. Or more importantly self and other.

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Gurleen Kaur Narang 18 July 2017

A lot is tol in just a few words.Wonderful!

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 July 2017

Muse! ! Life and death! Thanks for sharing.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 18 July 2017

Corrects the space Between death and me And you..................................................................................................Nothing more to say!

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