! ! ! ! I'Ll Never Be Loved! ! ! ! Poem by Aastha Uppal

! ! ! ! I'Ll Never Be Loved! ! ! !

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Not ready to accept till now
Always had an inner row
Someone somewhere i'll find
Love between us will help us bind.

i know not how long i have waited
i think love is extravagently rated
it's high time i admit yes i fear
i'll never be loved, it's now clear.

Denied, rejected, crushed by all
Like the rotten leaves of the fall
They blame me for all they can
Being a human is the worst, what a clan.

Someone to scold, someone to hold
A loving hand always there to mould
You know not how lucky you are
Someone is always there for you even when you are far.

Being loved is a bliss
Someone to love is all i miss
it's high time i admit yes i fear
i'll never be loved it's now clear.

Now rotting in an ORPHAN'S GRAVE
All i'll say, for love i crave
Now there's nothing to fear
because now it's clear
i have never been loved and
i'll never be loved it's now clear.


DEDICATED TO ALL THE ORPHANS! ! ! ! !

-aAstha

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajinder Singh 24 January 2010

don't worry you will find someone who will love truly.Beautiful poem

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Allemagne Roßmann 19 February 2010

this world is big and bad but there are men with hearts still...........and i wish someone will come for your appreciation someday someplace--then it is gonna be golden moments for you ----and every woman remembers that as glimpse when they become old and counting days with wrinkles on face and pole on hand------God bless.Shalom.Aamit Rothschild(Amit Ray) .

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Krishna Mishra 02 March 2010

simple yet quite strong

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Siddharth Singh 03 March 2010

Agonisingly real. Can't help but feel for the orphans.

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Ankita Sharma 14 March 2010

mmoving: ( .............

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Seule Coeur 27 February 2012

Real touching words and those has been through this dark tunnel of life can have this abstract touch of thy poetry.. I really appreciate it.

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 20 February 2012

Absolutely beautiful with an amazing twist in the end :) ...nice tribute to all the Orphans.. I'll never be loved i'm much familiar to this sentence..but not in an orphan way. Good one! !

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Lucky Gautam 30 January 2012

very nice... simply mind blowing... ur thoughts ur views n the way u expressd them

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Aranthabailu Ummar 05 October 2011

now love is redefined. The pure love what we learnt from our fore fathers is no more exist. Now it is selfish too What you read from your heart is good but expecting the same is not good

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Allemagne Roßmann 25 September 2011

The way u expressed the situation of mind is awesome and for love-please do not wait for it..let it wait for u...is better coz we live a transitory and temporary life..u do not know even which time u leave this world though people are advised not to be mortal everytime and nurture a positive attitude..harbour the days as it comes coz nothing is more important than ur life and that u r living beyond earthly possessions striking a loom that though will not fetch u something in the long run rather than fighting ur mind snatching the patience away which u will feel later on u could have given to those abstract books, other sides of life which cannot but speaks in silence to be urs at the first place forever provided u r committed strongly...Well co/ordnitaed art as poetic expressions here.

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