I'Ll Write You When I Can Poem by Jim Norausky

well rhyming and amusing. sir, you read my poem reformation. you are the first one and the american to comment. i am humbled by your words as Opoma was humbled by events yesterday.

'Says so much with so few words' Rachel Ann Butler

Great work Jim and clever too! Top marks! Karin Anderson

This is a very nicely written tanka, Jim, perfect in syllable count with some very sly lines as well. Most of us Americans tend to view a tanka as simply an extended haiku or senryu, which, needless to say, upsets our purist friends considerably! To their further consternation, a poet from the Smoky Mountains of North Carolina deveoped a new haiku/senryu format, the 2-3-2 poem, which is not easy to write, to say the least. Carl.

Clever lines. I like it.

i like couplets you can say so little in eloquence...expressing more of your passion in a simpliest form...10...: 0)