I Love You Poem by Ayi Escalona

I Love You

Rating: 5.0


When I am dead and darkness reigns
My body decays but the soul remains
To the breeze t'will float
Whispering 'I Love You' though mute

My decayed body will soon be powdered
Like dust in wilderness that eyes are scared
Whereupon mourning tears are shed
Dust molds....'I Love You' and thy hearts comforted

In happiness you shall remember
For death has not put us asunder
In world next still we meet
Where everlasting bliss are set

Here...this earth is just a mere river
Creatures lives are its water
Death.... the mightiest current
That brings all to world beneath

My absence will be that distance to consider
Pondered afar yet so near
Your eyes may stare but soul's unseen
The soul that float to wind's burden

When in darkness trail thy love shall be my light
Thy preserved fidelity is my soul's delight
And let all prayers spent be replied
'I Love You' till you're in my side

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lady Grace 25 August 2009

kani nga poem nimo ba, kay makahuna huna dod kog tyabaw..waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...kay murag inenglish ra dod ni xa..pwede mohimo anig lines sa ubos? ... daghang bitoon ni isa way naako daghang bulak ni isa, way ning dunol ASA RA ANG SUNDANG BI... KADTONG KANG LAPULAPU GIKAN KAY MAO TOY GAMITON NAKU SA PAG HIWA SA BUAYA NGA AKONG NADAKPAN UG HIMOONG INUN UNAN.... UY WALA KO MOINGON NGA MOKATAWA KA UY..DILI MAN GANI NI KATAW ANAN...BLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE..ATIK ATIK RA GANI..BLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE...MAKAKAON KAHA TA SA BUAYA..KAGAHI POD UY..

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A really beautiful poem Ariel and with nice flow and tender message. Thank you for commenting on my poem Night Sky Senryu poem. 10 love Karin

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Anju Addanki 15 July 2009

Wonderful meaning ful poem.

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Ken Suh 15 January 2009

This is amazing! You feel so strong for this person, its heart shattering! Wow is all I can say! ! ! PLEAZE write more things like this! ! -your friend Ken

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Jurietta Duraan 16 March 2008

Well, that made me cry.... it is tender and filled with emotion....

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Marieta Maglas 08 April 2010

wonderful lyric poem, deep feelings well embedded 10/10

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Ken E Hall 06 December 2009

love poem written from the heart with deep feelings on until the after life fine poem Ariel thanks+++++10 regards

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 27 October 2009

a good concept exploded nicely.10 marks shan

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Ilse Gudiño 26 October 2009

Beautiful Poem Ariel, its a wonderfull way to write... Thanks for comment on my poem also.... Hope to talk to you later... Take Care

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Reshma Ramesh 14 September 2009

beautiful love poem........

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