When I am dead and darkness reigns
My body decays but the soul remains
To the breeze t'will float
Whispering 'I Love You' though mute
My decayed body will soon be powdered
Like dust in wilderness that eyes are scared
Whereupon mourning tears are shed
Dust molds....'I Love You' and thy hearts comforted
In happiness you shall remember
For death has not put us asunder
In world next still we meet
Where everlasting bliss are set
Here...this earth is just a mere river
Creatures lives are its water
Death.... the mightiest current
That brings all to world beneath
My absence will be that distance to consider
Pondered afar yet so near
Your eyes may stare but soul's unseen
The soul that float to wind's burden
When in darkness trail thy love shall be my light
Thy preserved fidelity is my soul's delight
And let all prayers spent be replied
'I Love You' till you're in my side
A really beautiful poem Ariel and with nice flow and tender message. Thank you for commenting on my poem Night Sky Senryu poem. 10 love Karin
This is amazing! You feel so strong for this person, its heart shattering! Wow is all I can say! ! ! PLEAZE write more things like this! ! -your friend Ken
Well, that made me cry.... it is tender and filled with emotion....
love poem written from the heart with deep feelings on until the after life fine poem Ariel thanks+++++10 regards
Beautiful Poem Ariel, its a wonderfull way to write... Thanks for comment on my poem also.... Hope to talk to you later... Take Care
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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