I'M The One Who Is Always There Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

I'M The One Who Is Always There

Rating: 5.0


Though I'm homeless and lonesome as the wind
I'm not that helpless
I do my best to unwind
When it's cloudy or rainy on your mind
I'm there
To blow any blue make things refined
I never let you be despair
I'm the one who is always there

(2008/5/14)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M M 14 May 2008

A fine tender poem, showing all your caring... Beautiful words.

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Thad Wilk 14 May 2008

Nice read Shiraz, so good to know some people still care and are always there for someone in need! *10*! ! Best regards! Friend Thad

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Fahim Sayed 18 May 2008

Lovely...Quotes sir........really nice................

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Harley Marie 17 May 2008

wow this is really touching...

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Tsira Goge 16 May 2008

' Though I'm homeless and lonesome as the wind' ................................................................. NIGHTINGALE, Beautiful comparison enriches your poetry. And good poetic shapes do by it unforgettable... Tsira

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... ... 15 May 2008

That's beautiful, flawless poem there a 10/10, for me as your rose I'll give you a 20.

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C. P. Sharma 14 May 2008

Awesome poetry. Thank you for sharing it. Your poem takes me back to Shelley: 'Be thou, Spirit fierce, My spirit! Be thou me, impetuous one! ' Keep it up.

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