I Miss You Poem by Anusha Subramanian

I Miss You

Rating: 4.8


Dear Sister,

I remember your name,
I remember your face,
I remember your style,
And your different taste.

I remember our fights,
I remember our laughs,
I remember our arguments, for the silly little tops.

I remember the times we spent together,
I remember the times we avoided each other,
I remember the times we slept under the moon,
counting the stars like funny little fools.

I remember the days you kissed me,
I remember the days you slapped me,
But then I thought your decision was right,
to move to a hostel, for both of us to spend peaceful nights.

But my nightmare started right there,
When I waved you a goodbye,
With no one to fight and no one to laugh,
I shed tears longing for you to come back.

I remember each moment I spent alone,
I remember the terrible situations I couldn’t handle,
I remember each time that I longed to see a shooting star,
to wish for you to come back.

I remember each time that I hesitated to tell you,
I remember each time when I longed for you to read my mind,
Now, that I feel it’s ‘now or never’,
Here comes the truth that I always wanted to tell you,
‘I terribly miss you! ! ’

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leland Cromwell 20 October 2009

I no that your sister would love this poem. Your heart speaks true love......Wonderful write keep it up :)

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Prince ... 19 October 2009

this poem is so touching we cant foget someone who really marked on our life.............really gr8 poem

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Vijay Gupta 18 October 2009

God bless you. Good poem. Go ahead....

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Noah Alias 17 October 2009

dear Anusha... great job, like it n' thnks for the invitn...stay bless

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Joseph Skytta 17 October 2009

Very very moving poem. Absolutely loved the way you express your sentiments. 'nobody knows what they've got till it's gone' is definately a saying that you followed well in this. Amazing your ability to keep a consistent upbeat rhythm while writing about something so saddening. I can definately relate myself. The fact that when you are used to the company of another and find yourself alone, you no longer know what to do and instead reminisce about the times you once had. definately a 10 out of 10. You captured the emotions perfectly in each line. It continued to build up and up and up and then like a rollercoaster just dropped. That's what readers can relate to is the tragic things that happen.

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Surya . 18 March 2015

vow Great! what a touching write. congrats surya.

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i really like this poem...many people feel like you and i know how hard that is...not to the exact extreme but it brought up my own feelings of longing to have that one person back...

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Aijaz Asif 15 November 2009

true so true, it really is very heart warming fill with longing, I pray for your sister to come back soon....thanks for sharing and keep writing 10+ rgds asif

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Johannes Yeboah 20 October 2009

heart warming, Anusha! ! ! ...this poem is heart warming! ! ....great piece u have here and i pray she comes back.......congratulations from me and its a 10 from me! !

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jaynae carmel 20 October 2009

i really like this peom.......this poem reminds me of me and my older brother, he moved out of the house a year ago but now i miss him, he's like my best friend....... i really love this poem your talented.

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