promises stranded to dry lands of hope
guns and roses...thorns and bulletproofs
wildlife mountain vines...beauty of nature
touches are written...buried in the sand....
can't use my strength
nor convince them by charm
never the ink i wanted to refill
theirs are stones, theirs are hard...
in the morning, i saw mountain dews
fresh like lettuce...in garden they grow
somehow...mists become tears
to our desires....no one hears
you walk in that direction...i follow
then u run, ...i did
until i cant see you....i can't see you...
you left me with your people
with people who can't understand what life is
who can't understand how to grow...
so tired...i want to sleep
beauty..i can't admire anymore
my life is useless....please run back...to see you once more
You share a demonstrative gift of deeply felt emotions in your writing. I will return to enjoy more soon!
touching write... I can feel the pain and the emotions pouring... i like the way you mold this piece really touching, redlepzzz
this is so beautiful and touchy. i like the choice of your words and phrases. it just flows so magically and naturally. thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Dear Lady, A heartfelt poem.... My life is useless, nope, do not just rely on loving someone, there are many great things on earth where you can find real happiness and love.. Wait with your eyes and a heart opens wide and you will see... Kalimutan mo na lang po sya... Salamat, diane